关于雅思写作的技巧介绍

　　Task 2 :

关于雅思写作的技巧介绍

　　Topic: Most high level jobs are done by men. Should the government encourage a certain % of these jobs to be reserved for women?

　　You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task. You should write a minimum of 250 words. You should use your own ideas﹐knowledge and experience to support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

　　A: 写作段落大意:

　　1、Introduction - short statement of opinion.

　　2、Body paragraph Different reasons to support opinion. Statement of opposite point of view balances essay.

　　3、Conclusion - summarizes Body.

　　B: Model Answers:

　　1、Introduction / opinion

　　Most of the jobs in society that are high-paying，powerful，and demand a lot of responsibility are held by men. I do not believe this situation arose because women are incapable of doing high-level work. I believe society could benefit if more women were in postions of power and therefore I think the government should reserve a percentage of these jobs for females.

　　2、Why should government encourage a certain % of high level jobs for women?

　　Firstly, the problem of unfair employment distribution appears to come from social convention and not competence or true ability. At a young age most girls are not encouraged to pursue political office, business success, or professional prestige . On the other hand, boys are told to do these things. As a result, men hold the high level jobs but this does not mean they are very good at what they do. If the government set a quota for hiring women to do high level work, such as working in the government itself, then perhaps women would be more inspired to be ambitious in their life plans and contribute to a less-than perfect society.

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