我的教师英文写作评析

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我的'教师英文写作评析

　　I have an English teacher 。She is tall。She like playing with us。 She like dressing yellow clothes。 In her class ， I am very ative 。Because she is kind in class 。Our classmates like her so much。 But now ，she said ： she was left with us ， I am sorry to hear that 。 Because I Love her very much。 I hope she can continue doing our teacher。

　　1。“She like playing with us。 She like dressing yellow clothes。 ”因主语是第三人称单数，谓语采用动词的三单形式，故“like”应改为“likes”；“dress”意为“给某人穿衣”，故句中“dressing”应改为“wearing”。如采用并列宾语，这两句可以合并为一句，更简练：She likes wearing yellow clothes and playing with us。

　　2。“I have an English teacher 。She is tall。”如合并为“My English teacher is tall。”你认为哪种形式更好呢？

　　3。“Because she is kind in class 。Our classmates like her so much。 ”此句为含有原因状语从句的复合句，从句放在句首用逗号，主句句首字母应小写。“Our classmates ”改为“my classmates and I”更确切。

　　4。“But now ，she said ： she was left with us ， I am sorry to hear that 。 Because I Love her very much。 ”其中“But now ”与后句时态在时间上不符，故将“now”去掉。“she said ： she was left with us ， ”为宾语从句，出现三处错误：形式错误，去掉冒号;从句时态应改为过去将来时;“was left with us ”表达欠当。故此句改为“she said （that） she would leave us ， ”

　　“I am sorry to hear that 。 Because I Love her very much。 ”应改为“I am sorry to hear that because I love her very much。 ”

　　5。最后一句“I hope she can continue doing our teacher。 ”中的“doing”应改为“being”。

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