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学习历年高考英语写作满分范文，除了了解高考英语写作考试类型，还可以掌握规范的写作句式，对2017年高考英语更加胸有成竹。yjbys小编强烈建议同学们将下面八篇满分范文进行熟读或者背诵，希望大家在高考中能写出来的好英语作文。
2016年北京卷(第二节情景作文：20分)
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：地球日Earth Day
【写作解析】
情景作文话题常规，“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，属于常规考法。公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座都属于考前练习过的场景。故而总体难度适中。
涉及到的具体细节参考词汇：
图 1：a notice on the bulletin board, Actions for a Greener Earth, arouse students’ interest, learn about the activity
图 2：be divided into groups, transform waste into delicate articles, devote …to ..
图 3：hold an activity in the nearby community, promote the awareness of Green Earth to more people, turn waste into wealth, show support, give the articles to neighbors
图 4：hold a lecture in the auditorium, introduce the whole process of … and the importance of …
【优秀满分范文】
Actions for a Greener Earth
A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.
Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles, and turned those into dolls, handbags, issue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.
We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.
2016年新课标I卷(满分25分)1
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教MS Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear MS Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua. I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I am not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format.
I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2016年新课标Ⅱ卷(满分25分)2
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1.主题：环境保护;
2.展览时间;
3.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.
The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Li Hua
【名师点睛】
本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。
文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate，时间状语从句the last time you visited our school，条件状语从句If you want to join等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。
考点：考查半开放作文
2016年新课标Ⅲ卷(满分25分)3
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【试题解析】
2016年浙江卷(满分30分)4
“Planning is good，but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。
要求如下：
1.简述你对这句名言的理解;
2.用一个具体事例加以说明;
3.给出恰当的结尾。
注意：1.文章的标题已给出(不计词数);2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。
【优秀满分范文】
Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
【名师点睛】
本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了短语in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。
考点：考查开放式作文
2016年北京卷(第一节应用文：15分)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1. 该人物是谁;
2. 该人物的主要贡献;
3. 该人物对你的影响。
注意： 1. 词数不少于50;2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【作文解析】
应用文题材新颖，介绍中国历史人物又能很好的结合对于中国传统文化的考查，综合考查了考生的日常积累能力，可谓别出心裁。本次小作文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，肯定会涉及大量的词汇障碍，故应用文的难度定然整体提升。
参考词汇：in the long course of human history, contribute a lot to the development of …, be the pioneer of …, be honored the title of …, have a profound influence on …
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.
Cheers!
Yours,
Li Hua
2016年江苏卷(满分25分)7
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”.
Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer”competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the“Future Singer”competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要;
2. 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
【优秀满分范文一】
On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.
In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.
To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting.
(150 words)
【优秀满分范文二】
Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.
In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don’t want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.
In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.
(150 words)
2016年四川卷(满分25分)8
某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的季节;
2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如：气候、景色、活动、感受……)。
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目已为你写好;
3. 行文连贯，语篇完整;
4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。
【优秀满分范文一】
The Season I Like Best
Of the four seasons, I like spring best.
One of the most important reasons is that all kinds of flowers are in bloom and days are full of hope (in) this season. At the same time, I can play outside too! Whether we like riding, jogging or going on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outdoor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter.
Of course, there are many other reasons to explain why I’m so excited about spring!
精彩短语和句型
1. in bloom 盛开
2. be full of 充满
3. at the same time 同时;然而
4. be excited about 对..... 感到兴奋/激动
5. put on the back burner 把......搁置一边;延后
6. Whether we like riding, jogging or going on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outdoor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter.
无论我们喜欢骑自行车、慢跑或长时间散步，春天都能让我们能去户外享受这些活动，而这些活动在冬天只能被搁置的。
Whether...or...意为“不管…还是…”。allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事。That引导的是定语从句，先行词为activities。
【优秀满分范文二】
The Season I Like Best
If you ask me which season I like best, my answer is spring.
On the one hand, spring is the most beautiful season in a year because many kinds of flowers start to come out again, which are colorful. All the places around me are covered with green, making my life full of energy. On the other hand, I like spring because I can enjoy Spring Festival. It is known to us that the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, which comes in January or February. On that day, people eat delicious dumplings and wish a good luck. What’s more, I can get lucky money from my parents and buy some books which I like.
精彩短语和句型
1. on the one hand...on the other hand...
一方面……另一个方面......
2. be covered with 用……覆盖
3. wish a good luck 祝福好运
4. All the places around me are covered with green, making my life full of energy.
句意为：我周围的地方都充满了绿色，让我的生活充满了活力。句中现在分词短语作结果状语。
5. It is known to us that the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, which comes in January or February. 众所周知,春节是中国最重要的节日，它在1月或2月来临。
句中it是形式主语，代替后面的that从句，同时which引导了一个非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词festival。
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