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英语写作怎样使文章有亮点

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英语写作怎样使文章有亮点

　　1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

　　1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

　　A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

　　B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

　　分析：大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的。但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

　　2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

　　A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

　　B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁）

　　2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。

　　3)汤姆救了我妹妹。

　　A: Tom saved my sister.(一般句式)

　　B: It was Tom that saved my sister.(强调句式)

　　4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

　　A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

　　B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

　　◆强调句：可以轻松地将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。

　　It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter.

　　It was then that I realized the importance of English.

　　◆倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句。

　　Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me.

　　Only by this means can he escape from the big fire.

　　◆with引导的伴随结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with结构。

　　With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits

　　He always likes to sleep with the windows open.

　　◆巧妙地使用非谓语动词：可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。

　　Hearing that, the driver’s wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (低级形式：When he heard that, ……)

　　◆恰到好处的被动句：适合应用于较简短的句子，这样显得语言简洁生动，宾语一般是nothing、anything、everything等不定代词。

　　Searched all my pockets, but nothing was found。

　　◆感叹句：通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛，凡是“I feel ……”之类表达感情的句子皆可如此改造。

　　How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the math exam.

　　◆高级定语从句：若定语从句中的动词带有介词，只需将介词移至先行词后。

　　We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before.

　　◆进行时态：有时会含有一定情绪，尤其要使用always这样的富含感情色彩的副词。

　　I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus.

　　◆婉转表达：需要使用幽默的技巧，主要用于漫画型作文题。

　　I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned the shop after learning that my handbag had been left on the counter.

　　◆what引导的名词性从句：将动宾结构转化为此结构。

　　3、句式多样,复杂得体。

　　在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等；一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。

　　下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

　　5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房；卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

　　A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

　　B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

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