2017年中考英语写作范文以及点评

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2017年中考英语写作范文以及点评

　　面对即将到来的中考，很多考生对英语写作还是心里没底。这里小编特地送上实用的中考英语写作范文，并附以点评，希望对大家有所帮助。

2017年中考英语写作范文以及点评

　　2017年中考英语写作范文以及点评：

　　2017年中考英语写作范文1

　　Why Are Trees Important?

　　Trees are very important to us. Do you know why? Let me tell you.

　　Trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and make oxygen. That's important. People and animals need oxygen to live. Many small animals and insects live in the trees. Some of them also get food from trees. Trees can also stop water and soil from going away. If we have a lot of trees, we stop deserts from being large. I think this is very important. You know, trees are green. They can make our country even more beautiful.

　　Trees are our good friends. We should plant more trees and take good care of them.

　　点评：文章先阐明论点，接着论证，最后重申自己的观点。

　　2017年中考英语写作范文2

　　It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment

　　It's our duty to protect our environment. Where we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is. But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. It's terrible if we still do it. Now, it's time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. It's our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.

　　点评：作者多用学过的词语不但保证了正确，还巩固了所学的知识，并且注意句型的多样化，如长句，短句，疑问句，使用了“if，so, now, but”等词，整篇文章读起来朗朗上口。实际上，写文章就像串珠子，连接词就在于把一个个单词串起来。

　　现在，根据以上的范文和点评，我们可以总结出以下的'观点：

　　议论文要有自己的观点，要有论证过程，强调观点。常用的句型如：

　　1. 论点

　　Computer is important.

　　We must learn English well.

　　It's very important for us to...

　　In my opinion...

　　2. 论证过程常用一些衔接词可使文章读起来流畅，紧凑。如：

　　Firstly...Secondly…，Lastly ... Above all等

　　3.结尾强调观点，最好用不同的句型来表达相同的观点，如：

　　So we must...

　　So it's very important for us to...

　　I believe...

　　We should...

　　2017年中考英语写作范文：

　　Directions： For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Which Mode of Travel Do You like? You should write no less than 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below：

　　1. 有的`人喜欢参加旅行社旅游(package tours)

　　2. 有的人喜欢自己独立行动(travelling on one‘s own)

　　3. 比较这两种旅游方式，我喜欢的是……

　　范文：

　　With the general standard of living improving and the working week becoming shorter， more and more people are able to make a holiday trip to places of interest. While many like to join package tours fro convenience， I prefer to travel on my own.

　　I like travelling on may own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom. Travelling on my own， I’m my own boss; and can decide when to start on my way， where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot. I can always adjust my plan. On the contrary， in a package tour you‘re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base. At the sound of the whistle， you have to jump up from a sound sleep and， with heavy-lidded eyes，， hurry to the gathering place where you are collected and counted to board a coach. At the sight of the little flag waving， you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to him strict schedule， regardless of the weather or your health condition.

　　True，you may encounter inconveniences if you travel inpidually，for instance， getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals. But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints of his routine life.

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