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英语写作十大角度
引导语:用英语写作是大学生应具备的能力之一,但目前不少大学生不能用英语进行有效的书面交流,原因之一是不了解英语作文的类型及其特点。小编整理了英语写作的十大角度及其范文,供大家学习:
一、心态哲理话题
这类话题包括什么是幸福、生命的意义、梦想的重要性之类的。考的内容都跟人的成长、成功的心态、价值观、优秀的素质相关。比如说四级也考过没有强大的意识什么都做不成,六级考过在通往成功的路上要做好准备。同学们要注意积累与这些话题相关的词汇。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark,“Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
The Way to Success
“Give me six hours to chop down a tree , and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.”Abraham Lincoln once said. Although four hours seem to be quite a long time, it can help people chop down the tree more smoothly and less laboriously in the rest two hours. It is obvious that a full preparation can enhance the efficiency of trees-chopping.
The saying aims at informing us of the significance of adequate preparation. Definitely , we can’t emphasize the importance of full preparation too much in our pursuit of success. A full preparation enables us to achieve our objectives and realize our dreams more smoothly and rapidly. The more preparation we make, the more likely we are to become confidence, reduce the risks of failure and seize the fleeting opportunities. For example, when graduates hunt for jobs, it is those who are well prepared that can surpass other candidates and get the offer finally.
Accordingly, at no time should we overlook the power of preparation. Besides, we need to set up a proper goal, carry out a full investigation and elaborate a detailed plan before we take actions. “Preparation breeds success.” Benjamin Franklin also once said. (200 words)
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“给我留个小时砍掉一棵树,那么我会花前面的四个小时来磨斧子。”亚伯拉罕.林肯曾经说过。虽然四个小时看起来是挺长的一段时间,然而它却可以帮助人们在剩余的两个小时内更加顺利和省力地砍掉树木。很明显,充分的准备工作可以提高砍树的效率。
这句话目的在于高速我们充分准备的重要性。确实,没有人可以否认充分准备在我们追求成功过程中的重要性。充分准备可以使我们更加顺利和快速地达成目标、实现梦想。我们做的准备越多,我们就更有可能变得自信、减少失败的风险并且抓住稍纵即逝的机会。举个例子,当毕业生在找工作的时候,正是那些做了充分准备的人才可以超越其他的候选人并且最终赢得工作机会。
因此,我们任何时候都不能忽略充分准备的重要性。并且,在我们采取任何行动之前,我们都应该设定合适的目标,展开充分的调查并且制定详细的计划。本杰明.富兰克林也曾经说过:“成功孕育于准备当中。”
二、文化教育话题
这类话题包括论传统文化的六十、海外留学等,这类话题最近几年没怎么考过,同学们要引起重视。
From the cartoon given above, we can observe that there are two people watching Peking Opera. With the actress performing vividly on the stage, the old man is watching attentively. However, the little boy sitting beside does not even cast a glance at the actress and falls sleepy. It is obvious that he shows no interest in Peking Opera.
The cartoon reflects an interesting and usual respect of daily life. However, from a deeper perspectives, it also reveals the gradual loss of traditional culture in modern society. What exactly contribute to this phenomenon ? Possible reasons could be listed as follows: for one thing, quite a few people, especially youngsters, hold that Chinese traditional culture is out-dated and of little use in modern society. Perhaps, from their perspective, traditional culture form the distant past can hardly adapt to or keep pace with the ever-changing new world. Moreover, exotic cultures, to some extent, have also posed a great challenge to the traditional culture of China. As we can see, a large body of people have been attracted by foreign cultures which feature diversity, novelty and richness —Crazy fans of foreign TV programs, electronic products or even ways of life abound in our daily life.
However, no one can deny the significance of Chinese traditional culture. It is the crystallization of Chinese wisdom and civilization. An individual or nation showing no respect to the essence of traditional culture cannot be expected to develop and be stronger. Hence, something could and should be done to reverse the inexorable decline in the emphasis of Chinese traditional culture. (263)
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如上图所示,我们可以看到有两个人正在看京剧。当女演员生动地在舞台上表演,老者专心致志地看着。然而,坐在边上的小男孩甚至都没有瞥一眼女演员并且睡着了。很明显,他对京剧没有什么兴趣。
这幅图画反应了日常生活中有趣而又平常的一面。然而,从更为深层的角度来看,它也揭示了现代社会中的传统文化的流失。是什么导致了这个现象?是什么导致了这个现象?可能的理由可以罗列如下:首先,相当多的人,尤其是年轻人,认为中国传统文化在现代社会中过时而且没有什么用了。也许,在他们看来,来自遥远的过去的传统文化几乎是不能适应和跟得上持续变化的新世界的。再者,外来文化也在某种程度上对传统文化造成了巨大的威胁。正如我们所能看见的,相当多的人已经被以多样性、新颖性和丰富性为特征的国外文化吸引了 — 对国外电视节目,电子产品甚至是生活方式狂热的粉丝在我们生活中比比皆是。
然而,没有人可以否认传统文化的重要性。它是中国智慧和文明的结晶。一个不尊重传统文化的精髓的民族和个人是无法发展和强大的。因此,我们可以也应该做一些事情,来扭转现在人们对中国传统文化的重视的不可遏制的下降。
三、商业经济与行业发展
这类话题包括电子商务、汽车、饮食、境外旅游行业的发展。这对题目要对发展的原因、根源进行分析。
From the bar chart given above, we can observe that the number of people traveling abroad experienced some changes in China during the past several years. From 1999 to 2000, the number of Chinese people traveling abroad increased rapidly from 7.5 million to 10 million, and then to 12.1 million in 2001.
The bar chart reveals that people in mounting numbers are going to travel abroad. What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Reasons can be listed as follows: for one thing, the authorities have issued some preferential policies to promote the development of the overseas tourism industry, which encourages a sudden emergence of travel agencies that can provide customers with convenient overseas tourism services. Additionally, with the improvement of financial status and purchasing power, a considerable number of Chinese people can afford the once-deemed-expensive traveling expenses. Last but not least, as there exists huge difference in cultures, customs and landscapes between China and overseas countries, quite a few people hold that overseas traveling is not only a perfect way to relax oneself, but also a good chance to enrich their knowledge and expand their horizons.
By observing the trend in the past, we may forecast that the growth tendency will continue. However,overseas tourism is also a highly variable industry which is vulnerable to seasons and climates, international political situation,fluctuations in exchange. (226 words)
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如图所示,我们可以看到中国出国旅游的人数在过去几年经历了一些变化。从1999年到2000年,出国旅游的人数从750万快速地增长到1000万,然后又快速地增长到2001年的1210万。
这幅柱状图揭示了越来越多的人去海外旅游。到底是什么导致了这个现象?理由可以罗列如下:政府发布了一些优惠政策来推进境外旅游行业的发展,这促使很多旅行社一夜之间就冒出来了,这些旅行社为消费者提供了便利的境外旅游服务。其次,随着财务状况和购买力的提升,相当多的中国人可以承当曾经被视为昂贵的出国旅游费用。最后,因为中国和海外国家在文化、习俗和风景上存在很大的差异,相当多的人都认为海外旅游不仅仅是放松自己的完美方式,也是一个丰富知识和拓宽视野的好机会。
通过观察过去的趋势,我们也许可以预测这种增长的趋势会继续下去。然而,境外旅游也是一个高度变化的行业,它很容易受到季节和气候、国际政治局势以及汇率波动的影响。
四、就业与职场话题
这类话题包括大学生毕业后有人读研、有人进私企、有人进国有企业,或者大学生频频跳槽。
The two pie charts given above reflect the changes of employment of university graduates. From 1992 to 2002, the proportion of graduates going to graduate school and joint-venture remained unchanged at 25%. The proportion of graduates who intended to join state-owned firms increased markedly from 50% to 20%. However, the percentage of graduates with intention of entering private firm increased dramatically from 20% to 50%.
We learn from the pie charts that more graduates tend to choose private firms while less of them would like to work for state-owned firms after graduation. What might account for this phenomenon? Possible reasons can be listed as follows: for one thing, quite a few graduates come to know that, compared with state-owned firms, private firms can provide them with higher salaries. Moreover, private firms are famous for scientific management and fair competition, they seem to enjoy more experience and opportunities. Last but not least, some graduates hold that private firms surpass state-owned firms in working conditions, career promotion and personal relationships.
Graduates do have rights to choose their ideal firms. However, they should also bear in mind that what kind of firms will not determine how successful they will be. It is their abilities, attitudes and diligence that determine how long they can go. (211 words)
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这两幅饼状图反应了大学毕业生就业的变化。从1992年到2000年,毕业后读研和加入合资企业的毕业生的比例维持在25%不变。毕业后想加入国有企业的学生的比例快速地从50%下降到20%。然而,毕业后想去外企的学生的比例从20%迅速增加到了50%。
我们从饼状图中得知,越来越多的毕业生在毕业后选择私企而越来越少的学生愿意到国有企业工作。如何解释这个现象?可能的理由可以罗列如下:首先,相当多的毕业生逐渐知道,与国营企业相比,私企能够为他们提供更丰厚的薪水。其次,私营企业以科学的管理和公平的竞争而闻名,他们似乎可以在私营企业里获得更多的锻炼和机会。最后,有些人认为,在工作环境、职场晋升和人际关系方面,私企也胜过国企。
毕业生确实有选择自己理想的公司的权利。然而,他们也应该牢记在心,什么样类型的公司不能决定他们会如何成功。倒是他们的能力、态度和勤奋会决定他们能够走多远。
五、网络科技话题
这类话题近几年考的比较多。去年四级真题中全部都是网络话题。今年考的可能性可能相对小一些,但是同学们也要在自己脑中储备一篇范文以备不时之需。
The bar chart given above reflects that the number of readers choosing paper book or electronic books experienced some changes during the past four years. The number of paper book readers decreased slowly from 10 million in 2010 to 8 million in 2013. However, during the same period, the number of electronic book readers increased steadily from 8 million to 12 million.
We learn from the bar chart that people in mounting numbers would like to choose electronic books while less people like paper books. What might account for this phenomenon? Reasons can be listed as follows: for one thing, with the widespread availability of electronic devices such as smartphones,tablet PC and Electronic Reader,it is much easier for electronic books to be applied and popularized. Secondly, compared with paper books, electronic books are characterized by convenience in terms of carrying and saving spaces. Furthermore, the costs of purchasing and downloading electronic books are lower that of paper books, which enables readers to save a great deal of money. Last but not least, electronic books sometimes stand for high fashion and efficiency.
Whether electronic books will totally replace paper books one day still seems to be uncertain. However, no matter what kind of books will vanish, the habit of reading books should not be eliminated. (218 words)
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这幅所给的柱状图反应了纸质图书和电子版图书的阅读者的数量在过去的四年发生了一些变化。纸质书籍的读者的数量从2010年的1000万缓慢下降到2013年的800万。而相反的是,电子书读者的数量从800万稳定增加到1200万。
我们从这幅柱状图中得知,越来越多的人愿意选择电子书而越来越少得人喜欢纸质书。有什么可以解释这个现象?理由可以罗列如下:首先,随着诸如智能手机、平板电脑、电子阅读身背这样的电子产品的广泛普及,电子书的使用和传播变得相对容易。其次,相比纸质书而言,电子书的携带更加方便,也更加节省空间。再者,购买或下载电子书的成本比购买书籍要低得多,这可以为读者省下一大笔钱。最后,电子书似乎也是一种时尚和高效的象征。
是否电子书会在某天彻底取代纸质书不得而知。然而,不管哪种书会消失,阅读的习惯是不能消失的。
六、环境资源话题
近几年大家对环境资源话题非常关注,包括空气污染、雾霾、水资源短缺,但是四六级作文中都没有考过,今年同学们也引起重视。
The cartoon vividly reveals the phenomenon of air pollution or the decline of air quality. What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? Possible reasons can be listed as follows: firstly, vehicle exhaust gases could be one of the most leading causes. With the improvement of economy and people’s living standard, urban inhabitants in mounting numbers own their private cars. More automobiles will inevitably generate more exhaust gases. Additionally, household appliances widely used in cities also release a great mount of carbon dioxide gases, which further intensifies air pollution. Last but not least, many factories around the cities emit large quantities of untreated poisonous gases, which should also be responsible for the decline of air quality.
Definitely, air pollution will exert a detrimental impact on many aspects of people’s life. For example, many diseases such as cough, skin problem and lang cancer are caused by it. Perhaps it is high time that we should adopt some measures to solve the problem of air pollution.
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此图生动地揭示了空气污染和空气质量下降的现象。到底是什么导致了这个现象?可能的理由罗列如下:首先,机动车的尾气排放是最主要的原因之一。随着经济的发展和人们生活水平的提高,越来越多的城市居民都拥有了自己的汽车,而更多地汽车势必带来大量的尾气排放。其次,城市里广泛使用的家用电器排放了大量的二氧化碳,这也进一步加剧了空气污染。最后,城市周边的很多的工厂,也每天向空气中排放大量的未经处理的有毒气体,这也导致了空气质量的下降。
很明显,空气污染会对人们生活的很多方面造成有害的影响。举例,很多诸如咳嗽、皮肤问题和肺癌这样的疾病都是由空气污染所引起的。或许我们是时候采取一些措施来处理空气污染这个问题了。
七、伦理道德话题
这类话题包括社会公德话题,老人倒了要不要扶之类的。还有食品安全问题、产品质量下降问题。
From the cartoon given above,we can observe that there are many people in a bus. When seeing that an elder man is entering into the bus, the old man near the seat just stands up instantly, says “ please have a seat here” and offers his seat to the elder one. However, all of the other people around, young and healthy, show no intention of giving seats to the old and infirm man.
The cartoon aims at informing us of the phenomenon of the gradual loss of social morality. Quite a few people today are selfish and egocentric. when putting self-interest in the first place, they tend to overlook others’ benefit or feelings and become nonchalant. Moreover, this phenomenon can also be attributed to people’s concern that their social morality, which can be best expressed through kindness, hospitality and warm-hearted behaviors, will sometimes invite unnecessary trouble.
However,no one can deny the importance of social morality. It is conducive to the harmony of society, people equipped with the awareness of social morality are more likely to provide others with a helping hand, endeavor to abide by social orders and curb on their undesirable behaviors. Confronted with the inexorable decline in the emphasis of social ethics, we should adopt some measures to reverse the current situation. (218 words)
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根据上面所给的这幅漫画,我们看到有很多人在bus上。当看到有个老者正进入车子,一旁的老人马上站了起来,并说:“请坐我的位置”然后把座位让了出来。然而,周围其余的所有人,他们年轻而且健康,却没有显示出任何想要给这位年长且虚弱的老人让位的想法。
这幅漫画旨在告诉我们一个现象,关于社会公德的逐渐缺失。现在相当多的人都很自私,以自我为中心。而当把自己的个人利益放在首位的时候,他们往往就会忽略别人的利益和感受并且变得冷漠。再者,这个现象也可以归因于人们的某种担心,他们担心通过友善、热忱和热心的行为而得到良好展示的社会公德心,有些时候反倒会给他们带来不必要的麻烦。
然而,没有人可以忽略社会公德的重要性。它有利于社会和谐,拥有社会公德意识的人们更有可能为别人提供援助之手,努力地遵守社会规则并且约束自己的不良行为。面对对社会公德的重要性的不可抑制的下滑,政府应该开展大规模的教育运动来营造出一种尊重社会公德的氛围。与此同时,我们自己也应该提高意识。
八、家庭与两代关系
包括代沟、对孩子过分保护、过分溺爱、只关心下一代忽略老人。
As can be seen from the picture, the department in a store which sells nutritive products for children is surrounded by crowds of parents, making the salespeople extremely busy. In contrast, the neighboring department that sells similar products for the elderly seems rather deserted by customers. Its saleswoman feels so bored that she can not resist falling asleep.
The picture mirrors a common social phenomenon from a unique angle—people tend to care more for the next generation than the previous one. On the one hand, young couples dote on children, most of whom are the “only children”. Parents endeavor to prepare their kids for a bright future by raising them healthily. On the other hand, young couples fail to spend time with their old parents, and some of them are even too mean to provide the old with at least a decent living environment.
I think such a trend is quite abnormal and distressing. Filial duty used to be the most highly prized virtue among the Chinese for over two thousand years. Busy as people are, the duty should not be easily shirked. Supplying our old parents with material and emotional supports is not only a repayment to them, but can also set a good example to educate the youth.
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从图中我们可以看到,一家商店中的儿童营养品专柜前挤满了父母们,以至于售货员几乎要忙不过来了。而隔壁的老年营养品专柜看起来似乎已经被顾客们遗忘了。这个售货员甚至无聊得睡着了。
这幅图从一个独特的视角反映了一个普遍的社会现象,即人们对于下一代的关心超过了上一代。一方面,年轻的夫妇们把大部分的注意力都放在他们的独生子女身上,让他们健康地成长并为他们创造美好的未来。另一方面,年轻夫妇们没能花时间和他们的老父母们在一起,有一些人甚至吝啬得不肯给父母提供像样的居住环境。
我认为这是一个非常不正常和令人沮丧的现象。子女孝敬老人的义务一直是中国两千多年的历史中最为推崇的美德。现代人即使非常忙,但也不应该把这一义务抛之脑后。为父母们提供物质和精神上的关爱和支持不仅是对他们的回报,也为教育年轻一代树立了榜样。
九、青少年问题
偶像崇拜、独立性缺失
From the picture given above, we can observe that there are two young men using different ways to show admiration towards their role model. By writing “Beckham” on his face, the man on the left picture expresses his intense enthusiasm for Beckham. Meanwhile, to make himself resemble his idol, the man on the right picture spends 300 RMB making a Beckham’s hairstyle.
The cartoon aims at informing us of the phenomenon that many adolescents admire their role models in an excessive and blind way. Quite a few reasons can account for this: for one thing, with the mass media spreading the positive image of superstars, young people can hardly resist the charm of them. They regard superstars as their examples and desire to be people like them. For another, youngsters’ craze for superstars can also be attributed to the influence of the force of“group dynamics” :when members of their social networks show great enthusiasm for some idols, young people are so easily influenced by their friends or classmates and then imitate the behavior they see. This could be a subtle form of peer pressure.
We cannot draw an absolute conclusion whether idol-worship is good or bad. Simply imitating role model’s dresses or behaviors, youngsters may lose themselves and it will definitely interfere with their personal life or studies. However,when learning idols’ diligence, spirit and ambitions, young people can transform their worship towards idols into the passion for life, the stimulus to success and the driving force of struggling. Hence, whether idol worship is positive or negative is up to youngsters themselves. (272 words)
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如图所示,我们可以看到有两个年轻人用不同的方式展现对他们的偶像的仰慕。通过把贝克汉姆写在脸上,左边这个人表达了对贝克汉姆的热情喜爱。同时,为了使自己更加像偶像,右边这个人花了300元钱做了贝克汉姆的发型。
这幅漫画在于告诉我们一个现象,那就是,很多的青少年都以过度而盲目的方式崇拜偶像。相当多的理由可以解释这个现象:首先,大众传媒传播明星的积极形象,年轻人几乎无法拒绝他们的魅力。他们将偶像当成自己的榜样,并且渴望成为他们那样的人。另外,年轻人对明星的崇拜也可以归结为所谓的“群体动力学”的力量的影响:当他们社交网络中的成员显示出对某些偶像的巨大热情,年轻人很容易受到他们的朋友和同学的影响并且模仿他们所看到的行为。这是一种同龄人压力的潜在形式。
我们无法得出绝对的结论,是否偶像崇拜是好还是坏。如果只是模仿明星的穿着、行为,年轻人可能会失去自我,这很明显会影响他们的个人生活和学习。然而,当他们学习偶像的勤奋、精神和上进心的时候,年轻人可以将偶像崇拜化为对生活的激情,成功的动力和奋斗的驱动力。因此,偶像崇拜是好是坏,由年轻人们自己决定。
十、学生生活
大学生兼职、考研。
Directions:
In this part, you are to write a composition of no less than 150 words about “College Graduates Work as Village Officials”. You should write according to the outline given below. Please remember to write it clearly on the ANSWER SHEET.
Some college graduates choose to work as village officials.
1.Do you think it is a good idea?
2.What can they offer the countryside?
3.What can they gain from their village positions?
Nowadays, there is a growing tendency that college graduates in mounting numbers choose to work as village officials after graduation. People’s attitudes towards this phenomenon differ sharply. Some hold the positive view while others are against it. From my perspective, I believe that it is a wise choice.
The reason why I support them can be listed as follows: on the one hand, college graduates can contribute a lot to the development of the countryside. Firstly, having received formal education and professional training in universities, college graduates can help peasants master advanced technology. Besides, by spreading and introducing new concepts, they can also accelerate the development of rural culture. Consequently, the gap between the city and the countryside can be gradually narrowed. On the other hand, college graduates themselves can also benefit a lot from being village officials. In the first place, working in rural areas with adverse environmental condition and lower living standard, they are more likely to foster a spirit of hard-working and independence. Moreover, compared with their peers competing for limited positions, those who work as village officials enjoy more opportunities and are more likely to bring their abilities and potential into full play.
Therefore, it is a win-win choice for college graduates to work as village officials and more graduates should be encouraged to work in the countryside. (220 words)
参考译文:
现在,有一种愈发明显的趋势,越来越多的大学毕业生选择毕业后当村官。人们对这个现象的态度明显不同。有些人持有积极的态度,而有些人反对。就我而言,这是一个明智的选择。
我支持他们的理由可以罗列如下:首先,大学毕业生可以对农村的发展做出巨大贡献。一,在大学接受了正规教育和专业训练后,大学毕业生可以帮助农民掌握先进的技术。再者,通过传播和引入一些新的概念,他们也可以促进农村文化的发展。因此,农村和城市的差距可以逐渐减少。另外一方面,大学毕业生自身也可以从当村官这件事中受益良多。一、在农村恶劣的环境和较低的生活质量下工作,他们更有可能养成努力和独立的精神。再者,与他们在城市争夺优先的职位的同龄人想必,当村官的学生拥有更多地机会并且更有可能充分发挥自己的潜能。
因此,当村官是一个双赢的选择,而且更多地毕业生应该被鼓励到农村工作。
无论怎样的英语写作角度都是来源于生活时事,学生要提高英语写作就要贴近生活,了解新闻热点。
拓展:高效训练英语写作的方法
一、制定周密的训练计划,科学制定目标
1.写前准备阶段。此阶段要求学生掌握一定量的单词、短语、句型。围绕英语词汇手册,强化单词记忆, 每天规定一定量的记忆任务, 进行抽查、听写、单句翻译。结合第一轮语法复习,明确句子的基本构成,掌握怎样的句子才是正确无误的,特别对动词这一词类进行单项复习时, 更应该讲清楚、讲透彻。一段时间训练后,再教学生写出含有时间、条件、因果、原因等状语从句的复合句。
2.半控制阶段。在第一阶段训练的基础上,教师应指导学生如何将单句连成段落,连成文。有意识的教会学生一些关联词。如表示时间顺序first,second, third, after, before, soon, as soon as, inthe beginning, at first, then, in the end, since, atlast 等等, 学会添加not only…but also…, neither…nor…, besides, however, but, although 等, 这样保证书面表达不等同于单句翻译,而是意思连贯的一段话。此阶段需花一个月左右的时间,教师可出一些单句要求学生按逻辑顺序,添加适当的词语连成段落的练习,有目的地训练。除此以外,还可结合课文教学做一些仿写、改写、复述练习,教师给出一些词、句要求学生连成段落。
3.自由写作阶段。训练各种文体的写作,分类掌握各种问题的特点,各类文体各个突破。想在考试中有必胜的把握,则必须掌握各种文体的训练。以上各阶段循序渐进、由易到难,经过这样的阶段训练, 可避免写作训练的盲目性和随意性,有利于提高学生的写作水平。
二、围绕各阶段目标,训练方法多样化
训练方法多样化,可以尝试采用以下几种方法:
1.将听、说、读、写有机结合起来。
在课堂,教师可经常要求学生口头回答问题, 口头翻译句子,重复教师所讲的重要句子, 背诵课文中的重要短语、句型,甚至精彩段落。复习好某些重要短语、句型后,要求将所列的短语、句型连成一段语句通顺的话,切实做到学以致用,这样既加深了单词、短语、句型的印象,又进行了书面表达的训练。除此以外还要经常要求学生写各段的中心大意(Main idea),文章的概要(Summary),缩写或改写文章,将戏剧改写成故事,听写文章大意,或让学生口头复述,然后动笔写作。
2.将课文复习与书面表达训练结合起来。
在高三总复习阶段可将高中课文分类复习,按各种体裁分类,以便学生了解各文体的写作特点,为仿写、自由写作做准备。
3.充分利用高中课文后的练习训练学生,用于补差。
4.错题归档,补偏救失,写作要求规范。
教师指导写作时, 自始至终要培养学生良好的写作习惯。写作符合一定的规范, 将考试评分细则印发给学生,反复强调,认真学习,使人人明确标准,人人成为评卷人。每次写作之后,先要求学生自查、自改或互查互改。重点检查以下几项:
①短文结构是否离题。
②格式是否正确。
③内容是否完整。
④句子结构是否正确。
⑤有无严重语法错误,语言是否规范。
⑥书写是否清楚。
⑦单词拼写是否正确。
⑧大小写、标点符号使用是否正确。
检查后,并打上得分,收交后教师及时批阅,将普通性错误归类讲解。
笔者经过几年的总结,错误类型大致分为如下几类:
①本族语的干扰。如在翻译“为人民服务”时常写成“serve for the people”。
②语义用法不清。
③动词时态、第三人称单数形式、过去式常常用错。如“cost” 写成“costed”。
④语法结构逻辑错误。如“There are many students play basketball on theplayground.”。
对个别后进生经常要面批,讲解后要求再重新写作,优秀习作印发或张贴出来,后期要求记忆一些范文,这也有益于写作能力的提高。
三、科学指导写作,训练过程程式化
为保证训练短期见效,讲究科学,笔者将写作过程定为“四步”,训练学生成为定势,这“四步”是:
1.通读提示,仔细审题,确定教材、格式及基本时态、人称。这是整个写作过程的关键,只有理解正确,才能不走题,写出的文章才符合要求。
2.明确内容要点,列出主要短语、句型,这是组织语言形成短文的核心。只有要点全,才能保证在内容方面拿高分。
3.组织语言,将词汇扩展成句,添加相关连词,形成段落。保证句与句之间的衔接连贯,段与段之间的自然过渡,这是写作过程中的重要环节。
4.仔细检查修改,眷眷写工整、清楚。另外,整个写作过程要求学生要注意语言的灵活运用,采用多种方法表达,避免单一的中文式的翻译。
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