2017托福写作范文《现在父母养孩子更容易吗》

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2017托福写作范文《现在父母养孩子更容易吗》

　　题目：It is easier for parents to raise their children than 50 years ago

　　参考范文：

　　Taking a panoramic picture of human evolution, family education has been playing a very important role, especially in modern days. When it comes to the question of whether or not raising kids is easier than before. I, personally, think that parenting has becoming more and more difficult based on the following reasons.

　　First off, with the advent of technological gadgets kids are now more susceptible to negative information on-line, making it tough for parents to monitor and guide their kids’ behavior and mindset. As we all know, with the appearance of smart phones, tablets and computer laptops, it is easier for people of all age groups, including adolescents and teenagers, to get access to all kinds of information. To be more specific, celebrities especially entertainers, like movies stars, sports giants and pop singers are such bad exemplars for kids since they are constantly involved in sex scandals, abusive use of drugs, random hookups, getting rehabilitation. Kids, who are in their formative years, are not immune to these negative influence. Therefore, it is becoming absolutely tough for parents to guide them and any negligence might lead to be catastrophic for the kid’s future development.

　　Additionally, parents are so overwhelmed with their career and they tend to be negligent about their kids. Kids, on the other hand, without guidance from their parents tend to have both psychological and physical problems. A recent study done by National Society of Developmental Psychology indicates that there is a positive correlation between the parents’ working time and the likelihood for kids to experience psychological and physical problems in their adolescence. Indeed, fathers and mothers are more stressful and inclined to work more hours than those who did a few decades ago, leaving them little time to hang out and caress their kids. To make matters worse, kids who might experience unparalleled peer pressure, bullying and other kinds of school cliché are not able to get appropriate and timely instruction and encouragement from their parents, increasing the risk of a series of developmental problems. For instance, they might get addicted to computer games, involve in early sex, and even have marijuana and drinking problems.

　　In conclusion, due to the susceptibility of kids when exposed to negative information on-line or else and the parents’ lack of time spent with their kids, it is getting more difficult to raise kids now and kids are inclined to have both psychological and physical problems in their formative years.

　　附：托福高分作文有哪些常用句型?

　　a wealth of… “大量(有益的东西)”，尤其是后面加抽象名词时

　　… is a lifelong process 是持续一生的过程

　　put… into practice 把……投入实践

　　fulfill one’s potential 发挥某人的潜力

　　from within… 来自内心深处

　　remove the barrier for 为(发展、交流等)消除障碍

　　be in tune with… 与……一致，与……和谐

　　keep pace with… 与……同步发展

　　promote the development of… 促进……的发展

　　raise people’s awareness of… 提高人们的某种意识

　　… has found one’s niche 找到了属于自己的一片天地