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2016年托福考试常用句型和词语搭配
托福作文高分的标准主要是看考生词汇、句型的运用,以及托福作文结构的处理。本文总结托福作文常用句型,希望对大家有所帮助。
(1)用于描写漫画、图表的常用句型
①As the graph depicts, …
②From the cartoon /picture, we can see that…
③According to the statistics shown in the first / second graph,
④The table shows / indicates / reveals that…
⑤It can be seen /concluded from the picture / table / figures that…
(2)用于句首提出论题或现象的句型
①Recently,… has become the focus of the society.
②…has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.
③Nowadays there is a growing concern for…
④Nowadays it is common to hear / see…
⑤…has become a common occurrence in our daily life.
⑥Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of…
⑦It is only during the last / past few years that man has become generally aware that…
⑧There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes…
⑨In recent years, there is a general tendency…
⑩Nowadays… has become a problem we have to face.
(3)用于比较、阐述不同观点的常用句型
①Some people like / prefer…, while others are / feel inclined to…
②There are different opinions among people as to… Some believe… whole hold…
③Some people claim that… is superior to… Others , however , disagree with it .
④Some people believe… Others maintain… Still others claim…
⑤Some people suggest… Others, however, hold the opposite opinion.
⑥On the one hand, people tend to… On the other hand, they feel…
⑦Some people argue that… Others, in contrast, believe that…
⑧Although more and more people come to believe… there are still others who insist that…
⑨On the contrary, there are people in favor of…
⑩There are some people who hold different opinions about…
(4)用于陈述个人观点/想法的常用句型
①My own experience tells me that…
②In my opinion, we should attack more importance to…
③As for my own idea about… I believe…
④As far as I am concerned, I plan to…
⑤Personally, I prefer…
⑥In my view, both sides are partly right in that…
⑦But for me, I would rather…
⑧My own point of view is that…
⑨In conclusion, I support the statement that…
⑩As regards me, I tend to choose…
(5)用于书信写作的常用句型
①Thank you for your letter of…
②It is a pleasure for me invite you on behalf of… to accept…
③Thanks so much for your letter, which arrived…
④I am writing to you with reference to…
⑤I am writing to you in connection with…
⑥I would be grateful if you could / would…
⑦I would like to know some information on…
⑧It will be appreciated if you can / could…
⑨I would also like to know if you can / could…
⑩I look forward to hearing from you.
(6)用于结尾的常用句型
①From what has been discussed / mentioned above, we may conclude that…
②Therefore, it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that…
③It is high time that something was done about…
④From all the reasons / consideration above, it is evident / clear / obvious that…
⑤Taking into account all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that…
⑥Given the reasons / consideration I have just outlined / discussed / presented, I strongly recommend that…
⑦It is clear, therefore, that…
⑧All in all, what really matters is, in fact, to…
⑨It is essential that effective measure be taken to…
⑩From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that…
⑪ In conclusion, the most important is…
⑫ On the whole, it is high time that every one…
⑬As a result, we should take some effective steps to…
⑭ Judging by the figures / statistics, it is not difficult to see that…
⑮ Only in this way / in so doing, can be really…
托福高分作文标志:
1、是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1、适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2、善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore / for example / I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3、一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad, many, thing, think, people, opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one's competitive edge替换enhance one's competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I (By Simmy)
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with… 非常地道的句型,表达“与……一致”的意思,替换With …
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into (flood into / swarm into) 替换 enter into
Current (currently) 替换 now
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型, 说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
Our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen, which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings. 这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先There is no denying that这个句型,还有however作为插入语,function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing (fading 替换 disappearing)
Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people's lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play, do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象,merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage (defects 替换 disadvantage) Facet 替换 aspect
以下是30个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下:
1. individuals,characters, folks 替换 (people ,persons)
2. positive, favorable, rosy (美好的), promising (有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, superior 替换 good
3. dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的) 替换bad
如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive替换
eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4. (an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of, a host of, many, if not most) 替换 many.
注:用many, if not most一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替换 most.
5. a slice of, quiet a few , several 替换 some
6. harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that) 替 think (因为是书面语,所以要加that)
7. affair, business, matter 替换 thing
8. shared 代 common
9. reap huge fruits 替换 get many benefits
10. for my part, from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11. Increasing(ly), growing 替换 more and more (注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing,修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.)
Eg. sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12. little if anything, 或 little or nothing 替换 hardly
13. beneficial, rewarding 替换 helpful,
14. shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换 customer
15. exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换 very
16. hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable
17. sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18. capture one's attention 替换 attract one's attention.
19. facet,demension,sphere 代 aspect
20. be indicative of, be suggestive of, be fearful of 代 indicate, suggest, fear
21. give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换 cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换 ... reasons for sth
23. desire 替换 want.
24. pour attention into 替换 pay attention to
25. bear in mind that 替换 remember
26. enjoy, possess 替换 have (注意process是过程的意思)
27. interaction 替换 communication
28. frown on sth 替换 be against, disagree with sth
29. to name only a few, as an example 替换 for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible, 替换nearly / almost impossible
托福写作之词语如何搭配
托福写作中不少考生的作文整体语言简单,或者偏口语化,却掺杂了数个SAT阅读词汇,读来别扭——也就是学生粗浅地知其大概中文意思,但根据中文意思再放到写作里头便出现了不和谐,甚至是完全错误的用法。下面我们来看看托福写作中词语搭配问题的解决方法。
先来说说准确性。
譬如这样一个句子:My writing ability increased by reading many books. 拆开来看,每个英文单词对应的中文意思是对的。但存在一个问题,ability和increase是不搭配的。任何一个单词,都不能单纯地说用得好不好。语言是讲究搭配的,简单常见的词只要搭配合适,放置合适的语境,依然可以锻造完美的句子。这个道理和穿衣混搭是一样的。穿着漂亮不在于单品是如何大牌如何昂贵,而在于款式质地的和谐,以及最后的上身效果。在这个句子中,increase表示增加的意思,主要表示数量的增加。尽管有时也能表示程度的增进,但这里和ability的搭配是不正确的。一般我们说develop one's ability,也可以说improve one's ability. 因此,这句话得修改成My writing ability developed by reading many books. 当然还可以修改得更地道一些。后半句想表达“阅读”,学生一般的习惯是把“读”和“书”全部翻译出来。注意,写作是表达,不是翻译。这么写固然是对的,还不够理想。我们进一步把句子修改成My writing ability developed by reading much. 从表达效果来讲,已经“达”了,考生想表述的意思和阅卷人读到的意思完全吻合。当然句子可以再继续修改得更加豪华,本文暂不赘述。
那么,词语的搭配如何检验呢?在各种班型的培训课程中,老师固然会提到一些典型搭配。但更为重要的是考生自己掌握检验的方法。我个人比较推荐Oxford Learner's English Collocation Dictionary(《牛津学生英语搭配词典》),其中的语料来源和实用性都比较好。
以上就是小编推荐的关于托福写作中词语搭配问题的处理办法,最后,别忘了一件事情:仿写。只看不写,永远不能将输入语言化成输出语言。尽量仿写整句,保持原句结构,替换内容。作文应该是个人化的。因此,从一开始就在语言上打造属于自己的烙印才是上策,并且对将来的留学生活都将带来长远的益处。
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