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2016年BEC商务英语初级写作要求详解
商务英语考试分两个阶段进行。第一阶段为笔试,包括阅读、写作和听力,第二阶段为口试。以下是yjbys网小编整理的关于商务英语初级写作要求详解,供大家参考。
2016年BEC商务英语初级写作要求:自然
自然
商业书信的写作必须力求“自然”,不能满篇都是过时的商业行话。例子:
使用过时商业行话的句子 自然的句子
In compliance with the afore-mentioned agreement, dispatch of goods will be undertaken subsequent to receipt of said monies. . As agreed, we shall forward the goods to you when we have received your cheque.
We should be obliged if you
could contact our Mrs Xiao at an
early date. . Please contact Mrs Xiao
soon.
We beg to inform you that we are herewith canceling our order for
the same. . I am afraid we are
canceling our order for the
above goods.
Assuring you of our best attention at
all times, and awaiting the favour of your early response. . I look forward to hearing
from you soon.
Due to the fact that your contract has lapsed, we are unable to comply with your request. . As your contract contract has lapsed we cannot do as you request.
2016年BEC商务英语初级写作要求:可读性强
商业书信要求可读性强。
为了使信读起来生动有趣,写信人应该尽量避免使用单调的语言,力求使语言结构富于变化。可使用的方法有:
1. 变化文法结构
变换句子的文法结构也可提高信文的可读性。写信时不要千篇一律地使用同一种表达方法。例如,下面这个句子可以用多种方法改写
2.增强书信的可读性,还应注意运用精练的语言
商业书信必须语言精练,能用一个单词的地方尽量不要使用多个单词。例如:
高冗余度语言
低冗余度语言
Inasmuch as we require active consideration prior to making a decision, I am afraid that, in the circumstances, you will have to wait.
As we need to consider before making a decision, I am afraid you will have to wait.
2016年BEC商务英语初级写作要求:积极的语气
下面左边的三个句子采用提“中性”的语气,而右边相应的句子语气则显得积极。这种积极的语气可以使一个句子听上去更有诚意。
中性 积极
I am in receipt of your order for 250 pairs of Niky ‘Conga’ sports shoes. . Thank you for your recent order for 250 pairs of Niky ‘Conga’ sports shoes.
You failed to send your order to us before the new prices were introduced. . Unfortunately, we did not receive your order before the new prices were introduced.
We cannot devote much time to your visit as the March Sales figures are being compiled and we are very busy. . We shall devote as much time to your visit as our hectic schedule will permit.
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