英语六级作文范文鉴赏及分析

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英语六级作文范文鉴赏及分析

　　How Important Is Money ?金钱有多重要?

英语六级作文范文鉴赏及分析

　　No one would argue , I think , that money is unimpor tant . There a re ce rtain things that human beings need — food , shelter , medical care and these things cost money . But if one has enough money to live on , to pay for the basic essentials of life , is it impor tant to have a lot more money than that ?Will your life improve in propor tion to the amount of money that you have ?

　　Well , there is no denying that money can buy a lot . Maybe you do not need much money to pay for a simple shelter , but how about if you want a nice big apar tment in a nice neighbourhood , or if you want to buy a house ? In fact , people do get on each other’s ne rves if they are crowded together in a small kitchen , if a mar ried couple cannot but sha re a room with their parents , if childr en ar e not allowed to have a little privacy of their own 。

　　Mor eove r , it is nice to get a little pleasur e out of life, a little fun from time to time . Unfor tunately , many of the fun things that you can do today cost money . In modern cities , for example , on any night , outstanding performers appear in night clu bs and on concer t stages . Fur thermore , you can dine on foods f rom eve ry corne r of the wor ld in the restaur ants . So how can it be that many people in mode rn cities do not have fun ? Simple, they do not have the money to take advantage of all these att ractions 。

　　So , is money the road to happiness ? Not r eally . La rge numbers of people work eve ry day , work over time, work weekends , and make a lot of money . Are they happy ? No . They have no time to form or maintain friendship , no time to enjoy themselves 。

　　Sur ely everyone has thought at times ,“If only I had a lot of money , I would be the happiest person in the wor ld 。”But it is impor tant to r emember that money is only a means to an end , not the end itself 。

　　CET6六级作文结构分析：

　　Int roduction

　　Money is impor tant

　　Is it import ant to have a lot more money ?

　　With money we can do a lot of things which can’t be

　　done without money , e .g 。

　　Is money the road to happiness ?

　　Money — a means to an end , not the end itself

　　CET6六级作文万能句型：

　　shelt er n . 住所

　　medical car e 医疗

　　essentials of life 生活必需品

　　in propor tion to 成正比

　　get on each other’s nerves 大家都很伤脑筋

　　privacy n . 隐私

　　pe rformer n . 演员

　　How can it be that . . . ? ……怎么能行呢?

　　take advantage of all these at tr action s 利用这一切可享受的东西

　　work ove rtime 加班

　　a mean s to an end , not the end itself 达到目的手段而本身并不是目的

　　CET6六级作文内容分析：

　　本文是一篇议论文，全文围绕“Money is not everything ,but everything needs money”展开。作者的论点体现在“Money is only a means to an end , not the end itself 。”最后一句中。本文篇幅较长，但思路并不复杂，例证均邻近生活实际，因此并不难写。这样的议论文适合于六级和考研水平。

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