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2014年6月英语四级作文点评:campus(附范文)
2014年6月英语四级作文点评:campus(附范文)
【参考范文】
The Cherry Avenue
If I'm the guide of my foreign friend's visit to our campus, I will choose the Cherry Avenue as our first destination.
As the name implies, the Cherry Avenue is lined with hundreds of neatly-placed cherry blossom trees. It is about 200 meters long and a major scenic spot in our campus. In spring when the cherry trees bloom, the flowers are so dense that looking from a distance, it seems as if the road were surrounded by pink-hued clouds. Especially when there is a breeze, petals of cherry blossoms flutter and fall gently like a drizzle. Such breath-taking scene will put visitors into a kind of trance.
What's more special is the buildings along the avenue. Built in early 1900s, they are now called "cherry blossom castle". They've witnessed the history of our school and even our country. You can learn a lot about our school there.
In a word, a tour to the Cherry Avenue is both an amazing sight-seeing and a great opportunity to know about the culture of our school.
【点评】
本次四级作文一反以往的图片题形式,改为情境式话题作文,可能让准备好图片题写作的同学有点措手不及。不过话题贴近生活,要求介绍大学校园的某个地方,即一篇介绍性的短文,难度不大,只要避免语法错误即可保证得分。想要博出彩拿高分,可以在词汇的丰富性上下功夫,避免同样的词多次出现。
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