英语作文参考范文及点评

　　英语六级写作真题及范文：能力和外表 Abilities and Good Looks

英语作文参考范文及点评

　　英语六级写作范文题目是“不要以貌取人It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. It is unwise to judge a person by appearance.”，下面范文中的素材可用在本次的考试中。

　　英语六级作文参考范文：

　　Abilities and Good Looks

　　能力和外表

　　We are often told not to judge people by their appearance, because for a person, abilities are far more important than appearance. Throughout history, there are numerous examples of outstanding people with remarkable achievements who are just plain or not good-looking at all.

　　我们经常被告诫不要通过自己的外表来判断人，因为对于一个人，能力比容貌更重要。在历史上，有许多杰出的人都有杰出的成就，他们只是纯素或不好看。

　　However, nowadays some people hold the belief that appearance outweighs abilities, partly because some beautiful people seem to have advantages in competitive situations like job interviews and have been given more opportunities than others.

　　然而，现在有些人认为外表比能力，部分原因是由于一些漂亮的人似乎都在像面试竞争情况下的优势，得到了比别人更多的机会。

　　Nevertheless, I still firmly believe that abilities are more important. For one thing, although good looks are easy on the eye, it is always one's abilities that create values that really matter. For another, while people's good looks were born to them, abilities have to be gained through deliberate self-cultivation and years of hardworking which speak more of people's true colors. Last but not least, abilities grow over time while good looks only fade. Eventually, it is the abilities that help people succeed, so it is safe to say that abilities will always bring more to life than good looks.尽管如此，我还是坚信能力更重要。对于一件事，虽然好的外表很容易，但它始终是一个人的能力，创造价值，真正的问题。另一方面，人们对他们的良好外表，能力必须通过深思熟虑的修养和多年的努力，这讲更多的人的真实面目。最后但并非最不重要的是，随着时间的推移，随着时间的推移，能力会随着时间的推移而增长，而良好。最终，它是帮助人们成功的能力，所以说，能力将永远带来更多的生活比良好的外观。

　　明天会更好 Tomorrow Will be Better

　　There is a song named Tomorrow Will be Better. I like to hear it so much. Every time when I listen to it, I can feel the hope. Even though I don’t feel happy, I will be positive to life. We will meet all kinds of difficulties,but if we can hold on and keep move on, all the hard time will pass, the bright future will come sooner or later.

　　有一首歌叫《明天会更好》。我很喜欢听这首歌。每次当我听到这首歌的时候，我能感受到希望。即使我不开心，但是也会乐观对待生活。我们会遇到各种各样的困难，但是如果我们能挺住并向前进，所有的艰难时刻都终将会过去，美好的明天迟早会来到。

　　工作对生活的重要性 Work Is Important in Our Life

　　These days I have beenleisure but bored after finishing the final exam. In fact, I really don’t likethe way I have lived in these days, because I feel like a foolish that can'tfind my values and have to be supported by others. That made me crazy.Therefore, I consider that people should find and achieve their values in lives,especially female. Obviously, work is an important way to achieve our values.However, why is work important in our life?

　　期末考试过后的这几天我很闲但是也很无聊。事实上，我真的不喜欢这几天的这种生活方式，因为我感觉像个傻子一样找不到我的价值而要靠别人养活。这使我疯掉了。所以，我认为人应该找到并实现自己的生活价值，特别是女性。很明显，工作是实现我们价值的重要方式。但是，为什么工作在我们的生活中如此重要呢？

　　Firstly, work isthe only way for us to satisfy our basic needs. In order to get food, clothesand other living conditions to live happily, we have to work hard. In thisaspect, work is a natural responsibility for us, for our families. But usually,those who just consider work as a kind of responsibility regard work as a heavyburden in their life and they will feel really tired after a period of time,even some of which will choose to renounce the responsibility they have.Therefore, workmust have other positive meanings in deeper respect.

　　首先，工作是我们满足基本需要的唯一方式。为了获取食物，衣服还有其他生存条件以幸福生活，我们必须努力工作。在这方面，工作对我们以及对家人来说是自然的`责任。但是，通常那些只把工作当做一种责任的人，也把工作当做是生活中的一种压力。经过一段时间后他们就会觉得很累，甚至有的人会选择放弃他们的责任。因此，工作必须有在更深层面有积极的意义。

　　In addition, I strongly feel inthese days that work is an important way to achieve ourselves. Just as Maslowsays that human has five needs: physiological needs, safety needs, love andbelonging, esteem, self-actualization and self-transcendence. In my opinion,work is relative to the higher hierarchy of needs. We always need to achieveour value and worth to gain esteem or recognition from others by some ways,especially by work. I think it is easyto appear in the younger those who have some mature thoughts, so that mostteenagers will try their best to get rid of their parents’ care to make a livingby themselves. In this aspect, working is not only a way to make a living, butalso a way for us to achieve ourselves. In other words, working can bring satisfactionto us in spiritual.

　　另外，这几天我有强烈的感觉，工作是实现自我的重要方式。正如马斯洛所说，人有五大需求：生理需求，安全需求，爱与归属，自尊，自我实现和自我超越。在我看来，工作与更高层次的需求有关。我们总是需要实现我们的价值，想要通过某些方法，尤其是通过工作，从别人那里获得自尊或认可。我认为这对有成熟想法的年轻人来说是很容易的，所以大部分的青年会尽量摆脱父母的照顾独自谋生。从这一方面来看，工作不仅是谋生手段，也是我们实现自我的手段。换句话说，工作能够给我们带来精神上的满足。

　　In a word, work isimportant in our life. No matter what kind of occupation we pursue, we shouldtry our best. As an adult, without work, you would be bored, and even decadent.

　　总之，工作在生活中很重要。不管我们追求的是哪一种职业，我们应该尽我们最大的努力。作为一个成年人，没有工作你就会觉得无聊，甚至颓废。

　　The Real-name Train Ticket Purchase System Launched 火车票购买实名制实施

　　【精彩范文】

　　The Real-name Train Ticket Purchase System Launched

　　With the largest population in the world and an underdeveloped railway system, China is notorious for making train tickets particularly hard to purchase for ordinary citizens, especially during the Spring Festival when the railway is the primary means of transportation. As a result, ticket scalpers have proliferated, monopolizing a large quantity of tickets by either hiring people to buy tickets or conspiring with the ticket sellers within the railway stations.

　　As the entire nation’s outrage over ticket scarcity keeps mounting, the Chinese government has introduced the drastic measure that citizens purchase train tickets with valid personal IDs. The system is designed primarily to crack down on ticket scalpers whose business has developed into a major industry. By allowing each inpidual to buy only one ticket, the system seeks to make tickets accessible to people in real need, rather than controlled by a small number of profit-seeking and illegal scalpers.

　　However, this reformatory measure, while somewhat easing ticket scarcity, creates new problems. Buyers find the whole buying process troublesome and time-consuming. When boarding the train, the passenger who forgets to bring his valid ID certificate will be denied access to the train. I believe the introduction of each new system is coupled with shortcomings and there must be ways to improve the system as it is enforced. Of course, we look forward to the day when China’s railway networks are so sufficiently developed that tickets are readily available to anyone at any time.

　　【参考译文】

　　由于拥有世界上最众多的人口，但铁路系统欠发达，中国多年来一直臭名昭著，极难让普通民众顺利的买到车票；尤其是在春节期间，火车作为人们主要的交通手段，一票难求。这样一来，票贩子们层出不穷，垄断了很大一部分票源。其做法有二：一是雇人购票，二是与火车站内的售票员狼狈为奸。

　　随着全体国民对购票难的愤慨之情日趋高涨，中国政府已引入了一项重大的举措，即公民凭有效个人身份证件购票。该制度主要旨在打击倒卖车票的黄牛党，其贩票生意几已形成一个庞大的产业。由于只允许每个人购买一张车票，购票实名制尽量要使车票到达真正有需求的人的手中，而不是被控制在一小撮违法乱纪、唯利是图的黄牛党手中。

　　然而，这一改革性举措，对票源紧缺虽有所缓解，也带来了某些新问题。购票者们发现，整个购票过程甚为繁琐，十分耗时。此外，持票登车时，忘带有效身份证件的旅客将被禁止上车。我相信，每个新体制的引入，都会伴随着这样那样的弊端。随着这一体制的不断实施，必将有方法将这一体制予以完善。当然，我们期盼着有朝一日，中国的铁路网变得如此之发达，以至于火车票对于任何人，无论在任何时候，都能得来不费吹灰之力。

　　【值得熟记的句式与短语】

　　1. an underdeveloped railway system欠发达的铁路系统

　　2. primary means of transportation主要的交通手段

　　3. ticket scalper票贩子，黄牛

　　4. conspire with与……勾结

　　5. drastic measure重大的举措

　　6. crack down on ticket scalpers打击倒卖车票的黄牛党

　　7. develop into a major industry形成一个庞大的产业

　　8. reformatory measure改革性举措

　　9. ease ticket scarcity缓解票源紧缺

　　10. troublesome and time-consuming繁琐、耗时

　　11. be denied access to the train被禁止上车

　　12. be coupled with与……结合，与……连接，与……配合

　　What Is Success? 什么是成功？

　　What is success? Different people hold differentviews on This question. Some think that one is successful if he can make a great deal of money. Others argue that success means holding an important government post. Still others believe that whoever has got high academic title is successful. It is clear that there are quite different opinions on success.

　　什么是成功？不同的人对此问题有不同的看法。有些人认为，如果一个人能挣许多的钱，他就是成功者。另一些人则争辩说，成功意味着高居政府要职。还有些人则认为，谁有高级职称，谁就是成功者。可见，对成功有截然不同的看法。

　　In order to become successful, you should first of all be both perseverance and hardworking. As you know, whatever you do, there are always two possible results: success and failure. When you fail, you should never lose heart. On the contrary, you must build up your confidence and work even harder. You should always keep in mind that perseverance is the mother of success and industry is the key to it. In addition, you should pay great attention to your work method. It is necessary for you to sum up your experience constantly and improve the efficiency of your work. Finally, it is important for you to get along well with your co-workers, care for each other and help each other. If you follow these principles, you will certainly achieve remarkable success in the future.

　　要成为成功者，首先，你必须有毅力并且勤奋。正如你所知道的，不管你做什么事，总有两种可能的结果：成功或失败。当你失败时，你不应丧失信心。相反，你应该增强信心，并加倍努力。你应始终牢记，毅力是成功之母，勤奋则是成功的关键。此外，你应多注意工作方法。你应不断总结经验，提高工作效率。最后，你应该和你的同事友好相处，互相帮助，互相关心。如果你遵循这些原则，你将来一定能取得成功。

　　In my opinion, success means achieving brilliant results in one's work, that is, making outstanding contributions to the development of the country and bringing happiness to the people. So my conclusion is that even if one has made great progress in what he does, I don’t think there’s any reasons for him to be conceited.

　　我认为，成功就是在一个人的工作中取得成就，也就是说，为国家的发展做出卓越贡献、给人们带来幸福。因此，我的结论是，即使你在工作中取得了巨大的进步，你也没有任何理由妄自尊大。

　　【words】

　　post n. 岗位；邮件；标杆

　　e.g. I wish you every success at your new post.

　　academic adj. 学术的；理论的；学院的

　　e.g. They can set up new academic disciplines.

　　perseverant n. 坚持不懈；不屈不挠

　　e.g. Perseverance is the only road to success.

　　contrary adj. 相反的；对立的

　　e.g. Contrary, the woman more careful than many male.

　　industry n. 产业；工业；勤勉

　　e.g. I hope he will work with industry.

　　conceited adj. 自负的；狂想的；逞能的

　　e.g. How can you tolerate that conceited girl?

　　高考英语开放式作文点评和习作修改

　　第二节开放作文（15分）

　　请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。

　　In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it.

　　(请务必将情景作文写在答题卡II第二页指定区域内)

　　写作文有两个基本标准：一要切题，二要有文采。

　　这篇文章的题目要求有两个：（上面红字部分）

　　1. describe the following picture 描述图画内容

　　2. explain to the judges how you understand it 对这幅画的理解

　　所以，这篇文章基本可以分成两段。第一段用来描述图画内容。第二段用来写这幅图画说明了什么问题。第三段总结问题。

　　1．描述图画：

　　圆规（compass，今年很多同学都写不出这个单词，我查了一下这是个超纲词，在《高中英语课程标准（词汇表3500）》和《北京市高考英语考试说明》中都没有出现，显然是出题人的疏忽造成的，起码应该在试卷上提供compass这个单词。）画圆形很轻松，铅笔跑得满头大汗。两者形成了鲜明的对比。

　　2．说明问题：

　　(1) 圆规和铅笔有的特点不同

　　(2) 如何看待对方各自的特点

　　3. 总结问题：升华主题

　　You are somebody if you can innovative, but if you can't you are nobody.

　　第一段没有描述图画是大忌。可以写成：

　　As is shown in the picture, a pair of compasses are proud of drawing a circle with great ease, while a pencil are burdened with drawing a line. We can figure out something meaningful from the picture.

　　In our life, some people work very hard. Ang they often feel very tired. Because they often don't have enough experlence. But they often can be have some sudden harvest. So they usually will success, if they do something.

　　And another people have enough experlence. So they can do something very fast and well. But they usually can't have some harvest on work. S they can't honour all of life.

　　第二段需要指出问题的所在。首先要引用圆规(compasses) 和pencil 说明他们各自的特点和各自看待对方的态度。然后再升华到人的角度来说明，做人应该怎么怎么样。可以写成：

　　To begin with, difference can be seen clearly between the compasses and the pencil due to their different application. The compasses have every reason to feel superior in drawing a circle because they are designed to do so. But if the compasses are used to draw a line, the pencil may have the same feeling. As a result, a conclusion can be easily drawn: both of them have their own advantages.

　　So don't lose youself in your life.

　　第三段要总结问题，必须是从圆规(compasses) 和pencil的问题中的抽象出来，总结出来一个做人做事的普遍规律。可以写成：

　　From my point of view, we should be aware of our strengths and weaknesses and never show

　　due respect to everyone, for no one is perfect in this world.

　　官方给出的范文：

　　One possible version:

　　From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great effort. I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses, even pictures. So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show due respect for them.

　　从图中可以看到一对骄傲的圆规和一个勤劳的铅笔。圆规是画圆大，轻松，而铅笔很小，努力地画了一条线。我认为罗盘是合理的值得骄傲因为没有其他人可以做的更好。在同一时间，但是，他应该认识到铅笔都有自己的优势。铅笔可以做其他形状比圆规，甚至图片。所以在我看来，虽然我们对自己有信心，我们应该认识到他人的优点，给他们应有的尊重。

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