教你怎样写英语作文
一、写好文章的开头
开头是作文在阅卷老师面前的第一次亮相,它将决定你所写的文章在阅卷老师心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好,就意味着有了良好的开端,也就成功了一半。good beginning is half done,我们该怎样一提起笔就让自己成功一半呢?
(一)“开门见山”式开头
一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
1. 对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“a trip to huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是:last month, my family went to huangshan by train. it took us ten hours to get there. what a long and tiring journey! we were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
2. 对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。如“the time and the money(时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是:most people say that money is more important than time. but i don’t think so. first, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
(二)回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如never forget (永远无法忘记), remember (记得),unforgettable (难以忘怀的), exciting(令人激动的),surprising(令人惊讶的), sad (难过的)……如“a trip to huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写:i will never forget my first trip to huangshan. 或it was really an unforgettable experience i had.
(三)疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“planting trees(种树)”的开头可以是:have you ever planted trees? don’t you think planting trees is ……
再如“traveling abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是:if you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider singapore?
(四)倒叙式开头
在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。如“catching thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:i lay in bed in the hospital. i smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. do you want to know what happened to me? let me tell you. it’s a … story.
关于怎样写英语作文二、写好正文
(一).在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。
①强调句
[原文]my parents praised ah fu warmly. it had saved my little sister bravely.
[修正]my parents praised ah fu warmly. it was our brave ah fu who had saved my little sister
bravely.
②由what等引导的从句,此处的what相当于中文的.“所……”,有很大的概括力,如:
[原文]we had to stand there to catch the offender.
[修正]what we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.
what china has achieved in rec
ent years is known through the world.
china is no longer what it used to be.
③由with或without引导的短语。如:
he sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.
④分词短语。如:
satisfied with the result, he decided to go on with a new experiment.
⑤倒装句。如:
only in this way can we achieve our goal.
never before have i seen such a wonderful film.
⑥省略句。如:
if so, victory will be ours.
you can make some changes wherever necessary.
⑦对比,这是中文中也常用的方法。如:
failure is not a crime, but failure to learn from failure is.
when i play, i feel excited, and after it i feel relaxed.
(二).通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
[原文]he stopped us half an hour ago. he made us catch the next offender.
[修正]he stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
[原文]we had a short rest. then we began to play happily. we sang and danced.
some told stories. some played chess.
[修正]after a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing,telling jokes and playing chess.
(三).学会使用过渡词。如:
①递进: then(然后), besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等。
②转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the country(相反), after all(毕竟)等。
③总结: finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之), in conclusion(最后)等。
④强调: indeed(确实), certainly(一定), surely(确定), above all(尤其)等。
⑤对比: in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
(四).注意使用不同长度的句子。
(五).对于“较复杂的词汇”,可以从以下几个方面着手。
①.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:
[原文]a new railway is being built in my hometown.
[修正]a new railway is under construction in my hometown.
②.使用一些很有“洋味”的单词。如:
thank you for sharing the time with us.
the way he views the world is very practical.
③.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:
[原文]i like reading while my brother likes watching television.
[修正]i like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
关于怎样写英语作文三、写好文章的结尾
文章的结尾没有固定的模式,同学们可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般情况下,记叙文和说明文经常采用自然结尾的方法;但夹叙夹议和发表观点类的文章则往往有结束语,以使文章首尾呼应,结构完整。文章结尾的形式也因文章类别和开头的风格而灵活多
(一)自然结尾,点明主题
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如“helping the policeman(帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:the two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.
再如“the tortoise aand the hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是:when the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
(二)首尾呼应,升华主题
在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题,深化主题,起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如“i love my hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是:i love my hometown, and i am proud of it.
(三)反问结尾,引起深思
这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,而且具有一定的强调作用,可引起他人的深思。如 “learning english can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是:if we learn english well, we can …don’t you think learning english is great fun?
(四)表达祝愿,阐述愿望
这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中,表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。如“a letter to the farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是:i hope the farmers’ life will be better and better.
另外,书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语:best wishes;i wish you a merry christmas and a happy new year;i wish you have a good time等。
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