同位语中又有两个并列的介词短语修饰，与其他老师相比摩尔先生更注意教学方法，用强调一般时态的谓语动词用强调谓语之外的各种句子成分，使用各类从句如使用介词关系代词引导的定语从句。
英语写作练习句子练习
1.Somestudentevencan’twriteanessayinEnglishafterhavinglearneditfortenyear.
2.TheInternethaveplayanimportantrolein
3.TheInternetisbecomingausefulmethodincitiesandsuburbs.
4.Theconvenienceofmobilityhasmademoreandmorepeopledependentonprivatecars
5.Somanypeoplethinkthebestwayofdissolvingtheproblemisbanningtheuseofprivatecars.
6.Juveniledelinquencyisasoserioussocialproblemthatithasreceivedattentionfrommanypeople.
7.Thecomputerhasbroughtmanybenefitstopeople’slives,butatthesametimeithasbroughtmanyproblemeither(causedsomeproblems).
8.Manyyoungpeoplelikestostudynewknowledge.
9.Thesecondreasonisthatourworkisbecomingmoredifficult.
10.Privatecarsoccupymore(room)spaceandcausetrafficjams.
11.Accordingtothesurveyofsomeagencies,moreandmoreyoungpeoplehavelosttraditionalvalues.
12.TheauthoritiesofBeijingshouldtakemoreeffectivemeasurestoreducetrafficjam
13.Ourgovernmentshouldspendsomemoneyto(in)train
professionalpeople.
14.TheITindustryhasbeendevelopingfastfor(inthelast)3decades.
http://www.oh100.com hemodernsociety,peopleareclassifiedwithallkindsofstandards.
16.Youngpeopleoftentakecareoftheirparentsathome.
17.Theenvironmentpollutionisbecomingworseandworse.
18.NowChinesepeopleisbecomingmoreandmorerich(richerandricher).
19.Ourindustry(industrial)developmentisbecomingfasterandfaster.
20.Youngpeopleisbecomingmoreselfish,greedy,andarrogantthanever.
21.Publictransporthasmoreadvantagesthanprivatecars
22.Themostremarkabledifferencebetweenoldpeopleandyoungpeopleistheattitudetowardwork.
23.Thepublictransportisplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinacity’stransportationsystem.
24.Themeasureswillsolvetheproblemoftrafficjamseffectively.
25.Everykindofinformationisincreasingfast.
26.Peoplehopetolivemorecomfortably.
http://www.oh100.com mutingeverydaytakestoomuchtime.
28.Inrecentyears,abouttwo-thirdsofthestudentshavemobilephones.
29.NowthenumberofundergraduatesinChinaisequaltothatinAmerica.
30.Itisobviouslythatpeople’slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.
31.Banningtheuseofprivatecarswilldoharmtoeconomicaldevelopment.
32.Ithasbeenprovedthattheuseofthemobilephonecausessomedangerstotheusers.
33.Itisnousetosavemoney.
34.Firstly,traditionalvaluesofoldgenerationincludehardwork,diligence,bravery,honestyandsoon.
35.Noiseisakindofpollution.
36.Mostpeoplethinkagoodeducationcouldhelpthemfindagoodjob.
37.Itisduetothemoreintensecompetitionofoursocieties.
38.Peoplehavelittlesenseofsafetyabouttheirfuture.
39.Individualsshouldbemoreawareoftheimportanceoftrafficregulations.
40.Ithinktheindustrialdevelopmentandtheenvironmentalprotectioniscontradictory.
41.Chinaisadevelopingcountry.
42.Itisbeneficialtooursocietyandchildren.
43.Itisoneaspectofsocialadvance.
44.Sotheyliketopursueaneasyandcomfortablelife.
45.Whileitisanaturalphenomenon.
46.Theautomobileindustrycanalsogiveanincentivetothedevelopmentofotherindustries.
47.Modernpeopletrytosucceedineverything.
48.Youngpeopleareeasytobeaffectedbywesternculture.
49.Thatcanmakeanimalsdie
50.Somestudentschoosetohavealoantopayfortheireducation.
51.Itisobviousthateverypeopleshouldentercollegetostudy.
52.Inchina,thenumberofpopulationexceeds13billion.
53.Onlybythatcantheyperformbrightlyintheseriouscompetition.
54.Privatecarshaveabadeffectonourenvironment.
55.Parentsputtoomuchemphasisonthechildren.
56.Whenyouuseamobilephone,itislikethatyouaresurroundedbythousandsofmicrowaveovens.
57.TheCivilRightsMovementledmanyAmericanstofightagainsttheinequalitybetweenthewhiteandtheblack.
58.Ifyoudon’tdowell,someonewillreplaceyou.
59.Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,people’slifehave
beenimprovedgreatly.
60.Trafficaccidentshaveincreasethenumberoftrafficjams.
http://www.oh100.com ernmentcan’tuseeducationtoraiseitsGDP.
62.Especially,manyfamiliesincitiescanaffordhighertuition.
63.Manyuniversitystudentsdevotethemselvestoconstructingtheirhomeland.
http://www.oh100.com ernmentgivesthemnewpolicies,suchaslow-interestloan.
65.Forexample,yougoonvacationwithyourfamilywhileyourcellphoneringscontinuous.
66.Inordertogiveourchildrenabetterlife,wehavetoworkashardaswecan.
67.Iftheydon’twanttobeabandonedbythesociety,theymustworkharderthanbefore.
68.Resourcesarelimited,butthepopulationisincreasing.
69.Thisforcespeopletoworkhard.
70.Inordertomeettherequirementofthemodernsociety.
71.Theindividualsshouldtakeresponsibilitytotheenvironment
高考英语写作练习句子润色
写作训练一
句子润色——简单句的高级句式
简单句其实也可以不简单,若将简单句与非谓语动词短语、形容词短语、介词短语、同位语、独立主格结构等巧妙地合并在一起,不但可以表达更丰富的内容,而且也使句子变得更精彩,充分显示你在英语表达上的实力。以下各句选自近年各省市高考写作范文的高级简单句,请补充完整，欣赏、熟记、模仿：
1.同位语我想有一个笔友,希望是一个二十出头且兴趣相投的女孩子。(同位语中又有两个并列的介词短语修饰)
2.形容词短语Edisonwasagreatscientistandinventor.出生于美国的托马斯·爱迪生是一个伟大的科学家和发明家。
3.不定式短语为了学习好,我们需要做体育运动。
4.现在分词短语在这幅图中,一个鸟妈妈呆在一棵大树的鸟巢里,观看她的鸟仔飞走。
5.过去分词短语mobilephonesandtheInternetarefasterandmuchmoreconvenient.与信件和公用电话相比,手机和网络更快也更方便。
6.介词短语heencouragesustothinkbyourselves.他鼓励我们独立思考,而不是马上告诉我们答案。(insteadof的使用)
[即时练习]按括号中的提示翻译下列句子。
1.我是李华,四川的一个学生。(同位语)
I’2.与其他老师相比,摩尔先生更注意教学方法。(用过去分词短语)
3.北京动物园,建于1906年,有100多年的历史了。(用过去分词短语)
4.李华在公共汽车站等601公车上去学。(现在分词短语)
5.我们学生应当通过努力学习而不是考试作弊来获得好成绩。(介词短语)
6.合并句子:
⑴Themoontravelsroundtheearthonceeverymonth.
⑵Themoonisanaturalsatelliteoftheearth.(现在分词短语)
_______________________________________________________________________________
7.合并句子：
⑴Hewaswellknownforhisexpertadvice.
⑵Hewasabletohelpagreatnumberofpeoplewiththeirpersonalaffairs.(过去分词短语)______________________________________________________________________________1
写作训练二
句子润色---用高级结构让整个句子靓起来
利用以下各招可给句子润色,让句子靓起来。
1.使用强调句
用do,does,did强调一般时态的谓语动词;用itis...that...强调谓语之外的各种句子成分。直到她摘下眼镜她父亲才认出她。
2.使用倒装句。只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。
3.使用with的复合结构。如：’tgoonstudying.由于那噪音的持续,我无法继续学习。
4.使用非谓语动词。thesouthwestcornerofourschool,thebotanicalgardenhasanareaof1000squaremetres.校园西南角/面积1000平方米。
5.恰当使用被动句。最重要的是,必须釆取某些措施来阻止污染。
6.使用各类从句,如使用“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句。
There’中国的茶叶有很多种,其中龙井茶是世界著名的。
7.“数词+名词”改用“asmanyas+数词+名词”。请多房屋被摧毁,使多达千万的人失去家园。
介词短语与with结构强化训练
根据汉语提示完成英文句子,或用所给词的适合形式填空。
1.Wearesurethateverythingwillbebetter随着时间的推移).
2.(一到达),webegantoworkimmediately.
3.做完那些工作之后),weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotect在离开之前),wetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.
4.在比赛的过程中),youshouldfinishyourspeechinfiveminutesandtryyourbesttoexpreyourselfinEnglishfluently.一听到铃声),studentsranintotheclassroomasquicklyastheycould.随着科学和技术的发展),theworldischangingeveryday.所有的事都做完之后),theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.[用独立主格结构]由于那噪音的持续),Icouldn’tgoonstudying.
[with的复合结构]随着社会的快速发展),it’squitenecessarythatwe(should)haveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer.
写作训练三
句子润色——非谓语动词短语和强调结构专练
根据汉语提示完成英文句子,或用所给词的适合形式填空。
用非谓语动词短语
http://www.oh100.com hemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplant(一路上有说有笑).
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2.Atabout1o-clockthisafternoon，说他明天上午不能在咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)同你见面]asshehassomethingimportanttoattendto.参加英语演讲比赛)isahelpfulwaytolearnEnglish.是为了确定我们没有卷入任何麻烦事).
5.被他的话所感动),Ipraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosing名叫“母亲”的一首歌)forthestudents.
用强调结构或倒装句式直到19世纪末才)shootingearneditsstatusasasport.因为是他们把我们带到这个世界).我们知道国内外正在发生什么).只有用这种方法我才能)gainmoreconfidence.[用倒装句式]只因为他有病了)didhenotcometoschool.只有那时,我才认识到)thatIhadbeenwrong.
it句型
根据中文提示完成下列句子。
12.Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,就不足为奇了)Ihavesuchastrongenthusiasmonthegroupdancingcompetition.对我来说有必学会)toliveonmyown.众所周知)somestudentscheatinexaminationsatschool.
15.Aswehaven’觉得困难)tofollowtheteacher.在考试中作弊是错误的)becauseitbreakstherulesofschool.
写作训练四
句子润色——简单句合并成复合句
有时为了使句子的连贯性更强,表达也更为贴切、自然,我们在两个或者多个简单句之间加上and,but,or(或者,否则),for(因为),while(而,却),when(就在这个时候),notonly...butalso等并列连词,使其成为并列复合句。如：
⑴Ouroutdooractivitywilllastthreehours.We’llbebackatabout11o’clock
→Ouroutdooractivitywilllastthreehoursandwe’llbebackatabout11o’clock.
⑵Youmusthurry.You’llmitheplane.→Youmusthurryoryou’llmitheplane.⑶Honeyissweet.Thebeestings.→Honeyissweetbutthebeestings.
在两个或者多个简单句之间加上when,after,as,because,where,which,who等从属连词,可以使简单句变成复合句。如：
⑴WewillorganizeallkindsofactivitiesinourEnglishclub.WecannotonlypractisebutalsolearnmoreEnglishintheactivities.(改为含定语从句的复合句)
→⑵Hemissedthefirstbus.Hecametoschoollate.(改为含状语从句的复合句)
→即时练习
将下列各组句子合并成并列复合句或主从复合句。
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1.Hewastired.Hewenttobed.
______________________________________________________________________________
2.Ourteachermustbeathome.Thedoorisopen.
______________________________________________________________________________
3.⑴Asatelliteisanobject.
⑵Asatellitetravelsinanorbitroundanotherobjectinspace.
⑶Asatelliteiseithernaturalorman-made.
_______________________________________________________________________________
4.⑴Wehighschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains.
⑵Wecangetridofthemcorrectlyandwisely.
_______________________________________________________________________________
5.⑴Therewasonceafamousdetective.⑵HewasnamedSherlockHolmes.
⑶HelivedinLondon.⑷Thetimewasattheendofthenineteenthcentury._______________________________________________________________________________
6.⑴TheotherdaywehadanEnglishspeechcontest.
⑵Iwonthefirstprizeinthecontest.
_______________________________________________________________________________
7.⑴79.3％ofthesurveyedcitizenssaythattheirmainmotivationistohelptheirparentstoliveabetterlife.
⑵67.7％claimthattheyworkhardinordertochangetheirownfate.
_______________________________________________________________________________
8.Wemuststudyhard.Knowledgeispower.
_______________________________________________________________________________
9.⑴Studentscanimprovetheirwritingabilityinthisway.
⑵Theycanstrengthentheirself-confidence.
_____________________________________________________________________
写作训练五
强化训练：并列复合句和主从复合句专练
并列复合句用适当的并列连词填空。
1.Workhard,_________youwillfail.
2.Workhard,____youwillgetgoodgrades.
3.IworkedhardatEnglishanddevotedallmysparetimetopracticingEnglish，_____Ifailedtopathemid-termexamination.
4.About9:00lastnight,Iwasbusypreparingformytomorrow’stest_____suddenlyloudnoisescameintomyroom.
5.HalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols,__________48%oftheboysfavorsportsstars.
6.Howeversometimeswhenyoumeetsomedifficulties,whenyouquarrelwithothers________whenyoufailindoingsomething,youmayhaveabadmood.
7.NextSaturday,wegoingtopickapplesinavillage20kilometersawayfromourtown,_____allarewelcome.
主从复合句根据汉语提示完成英语句子。
8.Ihavetakenwithme_________________________________________________________(你
叫我帮你还给市图书馆的那两本书).
9.Wewillmeetat8:00amatthegate,________________________________(一辆蓝色的公共汽车将在那里等候).
10.__________________(如果你有兴趣),pleasesignupattheofficebefore5:00pmnextThursday_____________________________________(以便我们作必要的安排).
11.Itissaidthatslightlymorethan50%students,_________________________(这在世界排名第一),areshort-sighted.
12.________________________(在他进来后不久),hecriedonhisdesk.
13.Thecausesforshort-sightednearesocomplicated____________________________________(没有一种药可以治愈近视).
14.________________________________(如果我是野生动物园的动物),Iwouldfeelannoyed___________________________________(当人们不断地同我拍照时).
IfIwereananimalinthewildlifeparkwhenpeoplekeepphotographingwithme
15.Hesuggestedthat__________________________________________________(中小学生不要过分使用眼睛,且要多做户外活动).
16.______________________(使我印象最深的)ishisfamoussaying.“Geniusisonepercentinspirationandninety-ninepercentperspiration”.
17.______________________(我要强调的是)thateachofusshouldlistenmoretoothers.
写作常见句型综合训练
第一部分：
句型1：Thereasonarechieflyasfollows.Firstly,…Secondly,…
理由主要如下：首先……其次……
Thereasonsarechieflyasfollows.Firstlytreescantakeinalotofdioxidewhichisharmfultoourhealth.Secondly,treescanmakeourcitymorebeautiful.
句型2：Actionsshouldbetakento…必须采取措施去……
Actionsshouldbetakentogetridofallkindsofpollution.
句型3：Therearegoodreasonsto…完全有理由去……
Therearegoodreasonstocancelthisimpracticalplan.
句型4：ThereforeIstronglyrecommendthat…因此，我强烈建议……
ThereforeIstronglyrecommendthatweshouldwritemoreinterestingbooksforchildrenincasetheyshouldindulgeinobscenereadings.
句型5：Ahottopicdiscussedtodayis…现在，人们讨论的一个热点问题是......
Ahottopicdiscussedtodayiswhetherweshouldclonehumanbeings.
句型6：Thereisnoevidencetosuggestthat…认为……是毫无根据的
Thereisnoevidencetosuggestthatwemustdependonwesterncountriestodevelopoureconomy.
句型7：Whenitcomesto…manypeoplebelievethat…当说到……时，许多人认为……Whenitcomestoglobalwarming,manypeoplethinkitisdangerousforhumanbeings.句型8：Nowitistimesomethingwasdoneto…现在是采取措施做……的时候了Nowitistimesomethingwasdonetogetridofpollution.
句型9：Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemay…根据以上讨论我们可以……
Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayconcludethatitisnecessarytocollectmoneytobuildabridge.
句型10：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat………是不言而喻的。
Itgoeswithoutsayingthatdoingwellinyourlessonswillmakeyourparentshappy.
用上述句型翻译下列句子：
1.理由主要如下:首先,吸烟有害健康,其次，吸烟可能引起火灾.
2.必须采取措施解决这个问题。
3.完全有理由实施鼓励储蓄的计划。
4.因此我强烈建议学校采取措施保证每个学生的安全.ensurethesafetyofsb
5.现在人们讨论的热点话题是房假是否会持续上涨.(goup)
6.认为学习好的学生就一定事业成功是毫无根据的.(succeedinone’scareer)
7.当说到网络对青少年的影响时,许多人认为不应该让孩子远离电脑.(keepsbawayfrom)
8.现在是采取措施保护这个古庙的时候了.
9.根据以上的讨论，我们可以推断张华就是凶手.(infer,murderer)
10.真正的朋友应该互相帮助是不言而喻的.
第二部分
句型1：Itmustbepointedoutthat…必须指出的是……
例：ItmustbepointedoutthatitisoneofourbasicStatepoliciestocontrolpopulationgrowth.句型2：Itmustbekeptinmindthat…必须记住的是……
例：Itmustbekeptinmindthatthereisnoothersecretofsuccebuthardwork.
句型3：Asisknowntoall…大家都知道……
Asisknowntoall,knowledgeispower.
句型4：Itishardtosay…很难说……
Itishardtosaywhethertheplanispractical.
句型5：Thereisnodoubtthat…毫无疑问……
Thereisnodoubtthatyouwillbehelpedbyothersifyouhaveanydifficulties.
句型6：Totellthetruth…说实话……
Totellthetruth,manymistakeswemadecouldhavebeenavoided.
句型7：Asweknow…我们知道……
Asweknow,itwasnotuntilrecentlythattheproblemwassolved.
句型8：Asfarasweknow…就我们所知……
Asfarasweknow,ittookhimmorethanayeartowritethebook.
句型9：Ithasbeenprovedthat…已经证实……
Ithasbeenprovedthathistheoryisright.
句型10：Haveyouconsidereddoing…?你有没有考虑过做……？
Haveyouconsideredgoingabroadtostudy?
仿照上面例句翻译：
1.必须指出的是，英语是我们所学学科中的一门重要学科。
2.必须记住:失败乃成功之母.
3.大家都知道，有志者事竟成.
4.很难说这个理论是否正确.
5.毫无疑问,只有通过这个方法,我们才能按时完成任务。
6.说实话，我本来是可以早一点的。
7.我们知道,新中国是1949年成立的.
8.就我们所知道,他为人民的解放,耗费了他一生精力.(liberation)
9.已经证实这个计划是可行的。
10.你没有考虑过就如何学英语给我一些建议吗?
第三部分
句型1：Itis/wasobvious/clearthat…很明显……
Itisobvious/clearthatsheisterriblynervousonstage.
句型2：It’sagreatpleasureto…(感到)非常愉快
It’sagreatpleasuretoworkwithyou.
句型3：It’smygreathonorto…是我莫大的荣幸
It’smygreathonortointroducethegovernor.
句型4：Inorderto…youshould…为了……你应该……
Inordertounderstandthisessayfully,youshouldreadmoreaboutitsauthor.
句型5：Ithinkit(is)ofgreatimportance/value…我认为……很重要。
Ifyouwanttosucceedinlife,Ithinkitisofgreatimportancetosetagoalforyourself.句型6：Isitconvenientforyouto…?你是否方便……？
Isitconvenientforyoutohaveawordwithme?
句型7：Ifitispossible……可能的话……
Ifitispossible,lendmeyourcartonight.
句型8：I’mcuriousaboutsth./todosth.我对（做）……很好奇。
I’mcurioustoknowwhatwashappeningoutside.
句型9：Generallyspeaking…总的来说……
Generallyspeaking,peopleliketohearpraisesfromothers.
句型10：Howlongwillittakeyouto…?……要用多少时间？
Howlongwillittakeyoutorecitesuchapassage?
仿照上面例句翻译
1.很明显这种特殊的稻种使得同样的田地多收获三分之一的产量.(strainofrice稻种,produce,one-thirdmoreof)
2.跟你相处我感到非常愉快.
3.能有机会想你学习是我莫大的荣幸.
4.为了考大学，你应该学好英语。
5.我认为你制定这个计划很有价值.
6.你是否方便带我参观以下你们的新学校?
7.若可能,我想明天见你。
8.我很好奇，想知道你在做的一切。
9.一般来讲,学好英语不是很难。
10.联合国使世界摆脱贫困要花多长时间？（getridof）
第四部分：
句型1：我认为这是...的一个好机会.：Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyouto..
句型2：看起来好象：Thereseemstobe...
句型3：我认为……是不……：Idon’tthinkitisadj.to…
句型4：我们应该努力地做某事：Weshouldmakeanefforttodo…
句型5：问题是……：Theproblem/questionisthat/whether…
句型6：一方面……另一方面……：On(the)onehand…ontheother(hand)…
仿照上面例句翻译
1.我想找一找汉语中玩文字游戏的笑话,这是一个好机会.
2.看起来这两个词之间好象有点区别.
3.我认为我们应该携手保护环境。
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5.问题是你能否劝说他放弃他的计划。
6.一方面我钦佩你的才能，但另一方面我不相信你的判断力。
英语句子写作改错练习
Ⅰ,completesentencesandsentencefragment
1.Thedarkcloudsmeantrainlastnightwedecidedtostayhomeitwasluckyastormflooded
theroads.
2.Therestaurantwastoocrowded.Andnoisyaswell.
3.TheyplannedatriptoTibet.Atriptogetmanynewexperiences.
4.Thecoachleftthefootball.Underthebench.
5.Howweshouldwrite.
6.Iamfromalargefamily,Iwastheoldestchildandhelpedwiththeyoungerones,and,well,I
ampatientbutfirmwithchildren.
7.Itwasraininghard,theycouldnotworkinthefields.
8.Sheguidedustotheedgeoftheborderregion,sheleftustofindourownwaytotheoutpost.
9.Popcornoncewasfreenowyoupayforeachserving.
Ⅱ，TypesofSentence
Exercise1:
1.Thedogandcatfoughtinthealley.
2.Johnandhiswifewenttotownandboughtsomeflowersyesterday.
3.Theboysandgirlsstoodinthecornersandgiggledonthefirstdayofdancingschool.
4.Davidnevercomplainsabouthislife;hesimplyacceptswhathasbeenarrangedforhim
byhisGod.
5.TheteacherwasangrybecauseTomwaslateforclaathirdtimeonthatsameday.
6.Tomexplainedthathedidnotfeelverywellthatday.
7.Theywatchedtelevisionandenjoyedthemselvesalotinmakingcommentsonit,andI
don'treadapageforthewholenightbecausetheirnoiserepeatedlyinterruptedme.
Exercise2:sentencesforimprovement
1.Itsleaveswithered.Theydroppedontheground.Therearesomedewsontheleaves.
2.Itwasanearlywintermorning.Thesnowisfallingdown.Thewindisheavilyblowing.
http://www.oh100.com hetrashcan,thereisabunchofflowers.Theyareroses.Theylookbeautiful.
4.Onthestreet,thereisanoldanddirtytrashcan.Itissmelly.Butitsshapelookslovely.Itisin
theshapeofaheart.
5.Amanstandsunderthetree.Hehashisbrowsknitted.Thetreeisatthecornerofthestreet.Ⅲ.Unityideascloselyrelatedandacompletethought
1.Leninstudiedveryhard.Hewasthebeststudentinhisclass.
2.Johnlivedsimply(1)andstudiedhard(2).Hewasthebeststudentintheclass(3),and
wasalwaysreadytohelphisfriendswiththeirlessons
3.Apoorstudentinhisprimaryandsecondaryschoolyears,Tedbecameafamous
linguist.
4.ThreecobblerswiththeirwitscombinedequalChukehLiang.
Ⅳ.Coherence1.choppysentences
Faulty:Theteachergaveusanassignment.Itwasacomposition.Thecompositionwasaboutemploymentopportunitiesforuniversitygraduates.Suchopportunitieswerebecomingfewerandfewer.Theteacheraskedustohandintheworkthenextday.Fewstudentsdidso.Whentheteachercametotheclathenextday,helookedveryunhappy.
2.Parallelideashadbetterbeexpressedinparallelstructures
1)Amanshouldbejudgednotbyhiswordsbutbywhathedoes.
2)Webelieveitisveryinteresting,delicate,andastoryofmagic.
3.ambiguousreference
1)Heknewthathedidnotliketogotherewithhim.
2)Theysentachairtotherepairdepartmentthatwasdamaged.
3)IlikeMaryasmuchasJane.
4.danglingmodifiers
1)Ireadanarticleofmyprofessor'sinanewbook,whichdiscussesthedifferencesinkinshiptermsbetweenChineseandEnglish.
2)WhenlearningtospellEnglishwords,spellingrulesshouldbememorized.
3)AnoticeintheBostonHeraldreads:"Asecondfreebabiesclinicwillbeheldatnoon.Dogsmustbe
accompaniedbyanadultonaleash.
5.Ambiguitymayalsoarisefromtheinappropriateshiftinvoice,number,person,tense,moodandaboveallashiftofthethemeortopic,etc.
1)Thosewhohavenotfinishedtheirwork,youshouldreporttotheteacherbyyourselves.
2)Anyonewhowantstouseaforeignlanguagesuccessfullyshoulddevelopnotonlyyour
linguisticcompetencebutyourcommunicativecompetenceandcross-culturalcompetenceaswell.Andinthisprocess,studentsshouldknowthatyoucanonlydependuponyourself.
3)Asyousailacrotheharbor,channelmarkerscanbeseen.
4)Iwouldplaytenniseverymorningandswameveryafternoon.
5)Ienjoyedanicecreamsoda,buttheytendtomakemefat.
6)Everymanshouldhavesympathyforthepooranddisabled.Pleasebemerciful!Moreexercises
1)TheSpringFestivalbringschildrencare-freehappineandgrantspeopleleisured
refreshment.
2)Theteacherwasangry.Astudentwaslate.
3)Inthiswar,manyparentslosttheirsons,manywiveslosttheirhusbands,manychildrenlost
theirfathersandthousandsofpromisingyoungmanmissedtheirbestyearsforschooling.
4)ThefirstthingIdugupwasapieceofcloth.Therewerefivesilverdollarswrappedinit.
5)Morefascinatingabouthimarehislips,palebutfirm,whichmakeyoucan’thelpbelieving
everywordoutofthem.
6)Afterreadingthenovel,whatimpressedmemostishisbravery.
7)Helookssopalethathedoesn’tsayanything.
8)Hisbrotherwasatallman,andhewasagoodfisherman.
9)WhistlingforRover,mycousinputapailinhismouthandwestarted.
10)Ithinkapersonshouldchoosetheirownfriend.
ⅤConciseness1.Faulty:Ihavereadastoryrecently.Thisstoryhappenedintheearly1960s.
2.3.4.5.6.7.8.Faulty:Thecityhasapopulationofhalfamillionpeople.Faulty:Thereisonlyoneinterpretationthatisacceptable.Faulty:Itisyourassignmenttowriteasummaryofthestoryyouhavereadthisweek.Faulty:Thisorphanlosthisparentsattheageofthree.Faulty:Ipulledmyselftogetherandmanagedtoswimbackwithmyarmsandlegs.Faulty:Theoldprofessorhasafacelineddeeplywithwrinkles.Faulty:Sheisofteninthehabitofreadingthemorningpapersaloud.