例句使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染，九形容词主词句子如此以致于，两种旅行方式的好处你更喜欢哪种旅行方式为什么，用于提出两种不同的观点态度或喜好，引导让步状语从句从长远来看对不利引用谚语结尾值得借
写作优美句子
英语四六级:作文加分句型
一、the+est+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)
themost+形容词+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)
例句：HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothingis+~~~erthanto+VNothingis+more+形容词+thanto+V例句：Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~~~toomuch.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)例句：Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...(不可否认的...)
例句：Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~(全世界都知道...)
例句：Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~(毫无疑问的...)
例句：Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、Anadvantageof~~~isthat+句子(...的优点是...)
例句：Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwon'tcreate(produce)anypollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、Thereasonwhy+句子~~~isthat+句子(...的原因是...)
例句：Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair./Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycansupplyfreshairforus.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So+形容词+be+主词+that+句子(如此...以致于...)
例句：Sopreciousistimethatwecan'taffordtowasteit.
时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
十、Adj+as+Subject(主词)+be,S+V~~~(虽然...)
例句：Richasourcountryis,thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.{bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一点也不}
虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
十一、The+er+S+V,the+er+S+V,The+more+Adj+S+V,the+more+Adj+S+V(愈...愈...)例句：Theharderyouwork,themoreprogreyoumake.
你愈努力，你愈进步。
Themorebooksweread,themorelearnedwebecome.
我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。
十二、By+Ving,~~can~~(借着...，..能够..)
例句：Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy.
借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
十三、~~~enable+Object(受词)+to+V(..使..能够..)
例句：Listeningtomusicenablesustofeelrelaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、Onnoaccountcanwe+V~~~(我们绝对不能...)
例句：Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
英语四级作文预测及范文(一)
Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTravelAloneorTravelwitha
Companion?Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1)有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行
2)两种旅行方式的好处3)你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么?
TravelAloneorTravelwithaCompanion?
___________________________________________________________行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方
式，提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好：有人喜欢独自旅行，有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行
和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式，并说明理由。字串3
高分范文
TravelAloneorTravelwithaCompanion?
[1]Whenitcomestotravelingway,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.[2]Somepeopleliketotravelalone,
[2]whileothersprefertotravelwithacompanion.[3]Ofcourse,everyonehashisconsiderationforhispreference.
[4]Travelingalone,onecanenjoymorefreedom.The
travelercanarrangehistourashewisheswithoutthetroubleofhumoringothers.[3]Moreover,travelingalone[5]tendtobringthetraveler[6]unexpectedsurprise,[7]suchasmakinganewfriendandenjoyingadifferentscenery.[8]Comparedwithtravelingalone,travelingwithacompanionhasalsoits
advantages.[3]Foronething,thegroupmemberscanhelpandlookaftereachotherinthejourney.[3]Foranother,
[4]travelingwithotherswhohavesameinterest,youcansharecostsandexperienceswiththem.
[9]Astome,Iprefertotravelwithacompanion.[3]Firstly,wecandealwiththepossibleproblemsanddifficultiesinthejourney.[3]Secondly,Iliketosharethepleasureoftravelingwithothers.[3]Insum,[10]bothtravelingaloneandtravelingwithacompanionhavetheirattractions,andyoucanfindthepleasurefromeitherone.
【亮点点评】[1]“当涉及到或谈到时”。[2]用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[4]现在分词短语作伴随状语。[5]“倾向，趋于”。[6]“意外的惊喜”。[7]表示列举。[8]“和相比”。[9]用于引出自己的观点或选择。[10]“或者，或者”。
佳句临摩
1.佳句：Whenitcomestotravelingway,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.
临摩：当谈到是否应该取消“黄金周”假期时，人们的看法各不相同。__________________________________________________________
2.佳句：Comparedwithtravelingalone,travelingwithacompanionhasalsoitsadvantages.
临摩：和城市相比，乡村的经济相对落后。
___________________________________________________________
3.佳句：Bothtravelingaloneandtravelingwithacompanionhavetheirattractions,andyoucanfindthepleasurefromeitherone.临摩：网络教学和传统教学都有其各自的优点，因此，我们应该将二者相结合。____________________________________________
【KEY】
1.Whenitcomestowhetherweshouldcancelthe“goldenweek”holiday,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.
http://www.oh100.com paredwiththecities,thecountrysideisrelativelybackwardineconomy.
3.Bothnetworkteachingandtraditionalschoolteachinghavetheiradvantages.Therefore,weshouldcombinethesetwoteachingways.
英语四级作文预测及范文(二)
Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheMoonlightClan.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1)现在很多年轻人每个月都把自己赚的钱花光他们被称作“月族”
2)有人认为这是一种时尚的消费观念，但很多人反对这样消费
3)我对此的看法是
TheMoonlightClan
__________________________________________________________行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点针对该现象提出两种不同的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述“月光族”现象，引出对这一现象的不同看法;对比阐述两种看法各自的理由;表明“我”对“月光族”的看法并说明理由。高分范文如下:
TheMoonlightClan
Nowadays,moreandmorepeople,[1]especiallytheyoungarejoininginthearmyof“themoonlightclan”.Thesepeopleexhausttheirearningseverymonthwithoutanysavings.[2]Manypeoplethinkthisisafashionablelifestyle,[2]whilemoreotherpeopleobjecttothiskindofconsumptionstyle.
[3]Thosewhosupport“themoonlightclan”thinkthatthosepeopleknowhowtoenjoylifeandhaveahigherlifequality.[3]However,moreotherpeoplecriticize“the
moonlightclan”.Theysaythattheconsumptionhabitof“themoonlightclan”isunhealthyandsometimeswasteful.In
addition,nosavingswill[4]place“themoonlightclan”inadifficultposition[5]incaseofunexpectedexpenses.
[6]Weighingthesetwoarguments,Iprefertothelatterone.Inmyeyes,[7]though“themoonlightclan”mayacquire
temporarysatisfactionfromtheirconsumption,[8]inthelongterm,it[9]isunfavorabletotheirfamilyandcareer.[10]Justasaproverbsays,oneshouldalwaysprepareforarainyday.
【亮点点评】[1]“尤其，特别”[2]用于提出两种对立观点[3]用于引出两种对立观点各自的理由。[4]“使处于艰难的境地”[5]“以防，万一”[6]用于表明“我”的倾向。[7]though引导让步状语从句[8]“从长远来看”[9]“对不利”[10]引用谚语结尾，值得借鉴。佳句临摩
1.佳句：Manypeoplethinkthisisafashionablelifestyle,whilemoreotherpeopleobjecttothiskindofconsumptionstyle.临摩：勇敢的人往往会获得更多的机会，而懦弱的人面对机会也有可能错过。
________________________________________________________
2.佳句：Thosewhosupport“themoonlightclan”thinkthatthosepeopleknowhowtoenjoylifeandhaveahigherlifequality.
临摩：持悲观态度的那些人认为地球上有限的能源很快就会枯竭。_______________________________________________________
3.佳句：Justasaproverbsays,oneshouldalwaysprepareforarainyday.
临摩：正如一句谚语所说的，“机会只给那些有准备的人。”
___________________________________________________________
【KEY】
1.Bravepeopletendtogetmoreopportunitieswhiletimidonesmaymithemwhenchancescome.
2.Thosewhoholdpessimisticattitudesthinkthatlimitedenergyonearthwillbeexhaustedsoon.
3.Justasaproverbsays,“Opportunitiesareonlyforthepreparedminds.”
四六级写作备考：社会热点的两种写作模式
写作部分在四六级的考试中占15%，对于保通过的同学这部分至少应能保证及格，对于冲击高分的学员，这部分也是个高分突破点。据我们科学估计，在最后四周内，只要有针对的进行安排时间，对许多考生来说写作仍有至少20分的提升空间。使用那些材料才能有效的最大限度地拿分呢？
倒数第三周：准备项目：对于社会热点问题和热议现象，四六级作文也希望大学生有自己的见解和主张，比如盗版现象，电子书，以及一次性塑料袋等。准备重点：对于这一命题，我们主要以两种模板来应对两种写作模式。一种以社会热点引出的问题开头，着重于现象背后的缘由以及其解决方案。另一种以分析可争议问题的两面性为主体。准备内容：HotIssue型(1)模板一
Withthedevelopmentofmodernindustry,moreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheproblemthat______________(主题问题).Accordingly,_______________________________(伴随主题问题出现的新问题)isbecomingmoreandmoreserious。Confrontedwith___________________________(主题问题)，weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,_________________________(解决方法1).Foranother,_________________________________(解决方法2).Finally,_________________________________(解决方法3)。
AsfarasIamconcerned,thebestwayoutis
________________________(解决方法3).Consequently,I’m
confidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause
____________________(解决方法3的优点和好处)。
(2)模板二
Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,withtheadventof_____________(相关事物或现象)，wehavetofaceaproblemthat______________________(主题问题)。
Whatarethereasonsforit?Inthefollowingparagraphs,I’llventuretoexplorethereasons.Tostartwith,
_____________________(阐述原因1).Moreover,
__________________(阐述原因2).Inaddition,
_______________________(阐述原因3)。
Inviewoftheseriousneoftheproblem,effective
measuresshouldbetaken.Foronething,itishightimethatpeoplealloverChinarealizedtheimportanceof
__________________(解决主题问题).Foranother,the
governmentshouldissuestrictlawsandregulationsinordertoputthesituationundercontrol。
利弊型(1)模板一
Nowadaysmanypeopleprefer__________(主题)becauseitplaysasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.Ontheonehand,
________________(主题的优点1).Ontheotherhand,
___________________(主题的优点2)。
Buteverythingcanbedividedintotwo.Thenegative
aspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat___________________(主题的缺点1).Tomakemattersworse,__________________________(主题的缺点2)。
Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsfaroutweighitsnegativeaspects.Whatevereffectsithas,onethingiscertain,________(主题)itselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itistheusestowhichitisputthatdetermineitsvaluetooursociety。
(2)模板二
Withthedevelopmentofscienceandhumancivilization,manyformerlyunimaginablethingscomeintoreality.Someofthemhavepositiveeffectsonourlife,butsomearedistasteful.Thephenomenonof________(主题现象)isanexampleoftheformer/latterone。
Therearemanyfactorsthatmayaccountforit,andthefollowingarethemostconspicuousaspects.Tostartwith,__________________(原因1).Furthermore,
______________________(原因2).Eventually,
__________________________(原因3)。
Goodas____________(主题现象)is,ithas,unfortunately,itsdisadvantages.Theapparentexampleisthat___________(缺点例子1).Inaddition,___________(缺点例子2)。
Onthewhole, http://www.oh100.com (主题现象)andmakeourlifemorecomfortable。
时间安排：这一部分作文是议论和说明写作方法并存，属于备考的重点，建议每个模板都可以套用2个真题或模拟题练习。,
作文写作优美句子
一、
图画描述段
主要原则：
简单化原则零错误原则纯原则语法结构：定语从句+插入语
描述图画的形容词thought-provoking/compelling/profound/instructive/enlightening
1.Thesatiricalsketchgraphicallyportraysasceneinwhich______________________Itisgraphically/vividly/symbolicallyillustrated/demonstratedinthe图that___________
2.1)Whatmakesthedrawingstriking/intriguing/compellingisthefactthat__________
2)Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingis(thefact)that____________________
3)Asissymbolicallydepictedinthe(first/left-handed)图，____________________
3.其他描写
4.字幕1)Weareinformedbythecaptionthat“____________________________”
2)Thecaptionreads“___________”/Thecaptionindicatesthat“___________”
5.总结（不要用太难的表达，把图总结即可，不一定需要）
Undoubtedly/Unquestionably/Incontrovertibly/Indisputably______________________________三大套路
1.Ving的处理
1）Standingbytheriverside,theMastersighed,“Maytimepaonandonlikethis,neverceasingdayandnight.”
2）Flutteringthroughtheair,wedancewingtowing,lifeafterlife,foreverapair.
2.ADJ+N
3.=with+N
Withpassion/difficulty/optimism/confidence/joy/enthusiasm/grief/sorrow…..
单图：2016合作
Theimpressiveandthought-provokingcartoongraphicallyportraysamovingsceneinvovingtwohandicappedmen.(Depictedinthethought-provokingcartoonaretwohandicappedmen.)Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthatthetwocripples,leavingtheircrutchesbehindandsupportingeachotherwiththeirpowerfulhands,arewalkingforwardwithconfidenceandoptimism.Inaddtion,weareinformedbythecaptionthat“YouhavemerelyonelegandsodoI.Helpingeachother,wecantravelaroundtheworld.”
Asisillustratedinthethought-provokingcartoon,anoptimisticandconfidentman,takingoffhisclothes,isrushingtowardonabridgefrom“poverty”to“prosperity”.Whatmakesthedrawingintriguingisthatthebridgeisentitled/markedas“reasonablesystem”.Unquestionably,itisthepositivepoliticsthathasbridgedthegapbetweenthepoorandtherich.
双图：2006小贝头
Asisvividlydepictedinthephotosabove,Beckham,thehandsomeBritishfootballsuperstar, http://www.oh100.com hefirstphoto,Beckham’snameappearsonayoungman’ http://www.oh100.com hesecondphoto,thisyoungmanisdoingBeckham’schichairstyleinabarbershop.Weareinformedthatheisspending300yuanimitatinghisidol’shairdo.
二、阐述段
天龙八部三分天下
食品安全问题
到底什么是天龙八部？简单理解，就是八个可以在第二段当中构思的方面。第二段最好是总分总的夹心式写法。其中最最最关键的是现状分析，原因分析和后果分析。注意到，这八个方面是可以构思的方面，不是要都写，都写的话，这一段一般人过200，高手过1000.P2注意尽量控制在6-7句以内.
1.由浅入深：Simpleasthepictureis,theconnotationbehinditshouldbetakenintoconsiderationwithmoreinsightandpenetration.
2.深层含义：Undoubtedly,thepurposeofthepictureistoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.
3.现状（罗列除了很多可以参考的写法）
1）Thepastseveralyearshaswitnessed/experiencedthephenomenonthatpeopleingrowing/increasing/expanding/mountingnumberssufferedfromthesevereconsequenceofunsafefood.
2）Theunprecedentedeconomicdevelopmentoverthepastseveralyearsisaccompaniedbythedramaticincreaseofunsafefood.
3）Wecanthinkofavarietyofcheatingphenomenainourcontemporarysociety,suchasthepoisonousmilkwhichresultsinprevalentinfantkidneyproblem,andeggswhichcontainundesirablechemicalfactors,allofwhicharesoundinganalarmtooursociety.
4.原因（写一条就可以，不写也没问题，但是要让文章显得有深度最好分析一下原因）
1).人们为了追求利润，而丧失了道德底线
2).国家监管不力，相关法律并未完善，给了不法分子漏洞
3).万能BT理由，社会压力巨大。（withthequickeningpaceoflife,competitiongoesincreasinglyfierceinallwalksoflife,imposingtremendouspressureonallindividuals.）
1）Severalfactors,bothindividualandsocial,couldaccountforthenegativephenomenon.
2）Thereasonforthephenomenonmaybecomplicated,butwecan,toalargeextent,ascribeittothefollowinginterrelatedfactors.（1，2两句作用相同，都是引出两条原因。注意没必要两条，一条就够，两条主要是为了层次感）
3）具体的两条理由，Ontheonehand,agreatnumberofpeopleareonlyinpursuitofthemaximumprofit,totallyturningablindeyeto/totallyignoringthebasicmoralityofthewholebusiness.
Ontheotherhand,ourlegalsystemisfarfromperfect,whichdirectlyorindirectlyprovidestheimmoralbusinessmenwiththechanceofcheating.
（*）现状+原因（单原因）(其中还有象征点的写法出现)
Theirresponsibleteacherdepictedinthepictureisnaturallyassociatedwithagreatnumberofprofessorsinreallife,whoareonlyinpursuitoftheirresearchpapersandtitles,whiletotallyturningablindeyetotheirobligationasqualifiededucators,forthereasonthatagreatnumberofcollegesanduniversitiesregardthenumberofpapersasanessentialstandardtojudgeateacher.
5.后果/影响
Professionaldishonestynotonlyadverselyaffectsthehealthconditionofnumerousconsumers,butalsoposesaprobableandpotentialthreatonsocialstability.
坏：1.Adverselyaffect
2.poseaprobableandpotentialthreaton
3.exerta(n)unfavorable/undesirable/adverse/negativeconsequenceon
4.soundanalarmto
5.putanenormouspressureupon
好：1.Layasolidfoundationfor
2.exerta(n)positive/favorable/far-reaching/beneficialimpacton
3.playa(n)vital/crucial/irreplaceablerolein
4.serveasacatalystfor
教授的职责：Theindifferentattitudetowardseducationnotonlyunderminestheteachingqualityofuniversitiesandadverselyaffectsstudents’desireforknowledge,butalsosoundsanalarmtoeducationsystemincontemporarysociety.
Undeniably,thisphenomenonwillreducetheeducationquality.Andstudentsontheotherhand,willhavenospecificandprofessionalinstruction.
6.举例说明Itcanbebestexemplifiedbythecaseofpoisonousmilkandotherdangerousfood.(其实就是联系实际，也可以说就是现状的具体体现)
参考：2006：小贝头
Undoubtedly,thephotoshavesubtlyreflectedthesocialphenomenonthatidolworshipisprevalentamongtheyouthnowadays.Beckhamrepresentstheimageofsportherowhosehandsomeappearanceandunparalleledfootballskillsarepassionatelyadoredbyallthesportsfans.Likewise,severalteenagegirlswontheirfameovernightinThe2005SuperGirlContestinChina,whichprovokednationwidenoisydebatesonthevalueandharmofadmiringtheseidols.Generallyspeaking,youngpeopleareinclinedtoadorethepeoplewhoexcelinappearance,intelligenceortalent.
7.层进的修辞手法和转折的运用
Itisundeniablethatwemustbehonest,whichshouldbeaccepted,respected,appreciatedandshared(advocated) http://www.oh100.com
8.威胁性总结
Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse/thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywouldbecomeunimaginableanduncontrollable/thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywouldbecomeuncurbed.
增补：虚拟语气版：
Werethesituationtocontinue,itwouldbecomeuncontrollable.
考研第二段就是以上内容的合理整合，加上第一句的论点
Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.
和最后一句的结论（威胁性总结）Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse.
中间插入3-4句论据即可，成为一个夹心式的写法。一定不能写太多，第二段控制在5--6句，7句冲顶。
版本一论点+原因+结论（黑字是第二段首尾，几个版本都不变，其他是根据刚才的分析加入的论据）
Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.Severalfactors,bothindividualandsocial,couldaccountforthenegativephenomenon.Ontheonehand,agreatnumberofpeopleareonlyinpursuitofthemaximumprofit,totallyignoringthebasicmoralityofthewholebusiness.Ontheotherhand,ourlegalsystemisfarfromperfect,whichdirectlyorindirectlyprovidestheimmoralbusinessmenwiththechanceofcheating.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewhole
marketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse.
版本二：论点+现状+层进+结论
头尾两句不变
Simpleasthepictureis, http://www.oh100.com （最后一句可省，因为太长了）
版本三：论点+后果+结论
Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.Professionaldishonestyundoubtedlyexertsanadverseconsequenceonoursociety.Initially,theyadverselyaffectthehealthconditionofnumerousconsumers,forthereasonthatconsumerscannoteasilyrecognizethem.Additionally,fakegoodsposeaprobableandpotentialthreatonournationaleconomy,because/asconsumersdonotbelievethemarketsystem.Inotherwords,thisphenomenonwillunderminethewholebusiness.Finally,wehavebusinewithforeigncountries.Iffakegoodsarediscoveredintheoverseastrade,itwillundoubtedlyexertanegativeinfluenceonourreputation.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse.（最后一句可省，因为太长了）
版本四：论点+现状+一点原因+一点后果+结论
1)Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.2)Wecanthinkofavarietyofcheatingphenomenainourcontemporarysociety,suchasthepoisonousmilkandeggs,becauseagreatnumberofpeopleareonlyinpursuitofthemaximumprofit,totallyturningablindeyetothebasicmoralityofthewholebusiness.3)Inotherwords,professionaldishonestyundoubtedlyexertsanadverseconsequenceonoursociety.4)Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse.
1)是深刻含义；2）是现状+一点原因；3）是后果；4）是威胁性总结
西部大开发
1.由浅入深Simpleasthepictureis,theconnotationbehinditshouldbetakenintoconsiderationwithmoreinsightandpenetration.
2.深刻含义Undoubtedly,thispictureisthought-provoking,inthatitendeavorstoconvinceusthatthedevelopmentofthewesternparthasbeenaprevalentandpervasiveissue.
3.现状：Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedthephenomenonthatpeopleingrowingnumbershaveparticipatedinthecampaign.
或：Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedtheincreasing/soaringpassion(enthusiasm)ofpeopletojoinintheprocess.补充：参与/投身于的其他写法beengagedindevoteoneselfin
4.原因：
1)东西部差异大，东部很多人生活富裕，而西部一些地区仍然贫穷
2)这是和谐社会共同发展的需要。
3）BT理由，压力巨大。（稍微改写下，西部压力大就可以了）
这里暂且写一条：Somepeopleinthedevelopedareasareleadingaluxuriouslifewhileinsomeunderdevelopedregions,agreatnumberofpeoplearestilllivinginsheerpoverty.
5.影响
1）可以有效解决东西部发展不均衡的问题
2）极大提高西部人民的生活水平
3）可以提高西部人民的教育文化水平
一个词：深远！
Themovement,directlyorindirectly,willexertafar-reachinginfluenceonthewesternareaseventhecountryasawhole.Itcannotonlyalleviate(减轻缓和，不会的话换relieve)thepovertyoftheunderdevelopedareas,butalsolayasolidfoundationfortheeducationleveloftheregioneffectivelyandefficiently.
6.层进西部大开发应该被accepted,appreciatedandadvocated.
7.反面论证：要是国家不注意均衡发展，只顾东部，整个国家就会。
Supposeourgovernmentdoesnotpayenoughattentiontothewest,ourwholecountrywouldbecomeunbalancedandunabletosurviveandthrive(intheruthleandrelentlecompetition)或者正面总结：Generallyspeaking,thephenomenonwouldcontinuetoexertabeneficialinfluenceonoursociety,ifitiswidelyaccepted,appreciatedandadvocated.
注：本文并未采用举例说明的论证手段
三分天下法：
Undoubtedly,thesubtleconnotationofthepictureendeavorstoconvinceusthatthedevelopmentofthewesternparthasbeenaprevalentandpervasiveissue.(论点)Thedrawingisthought-provoking,inthatitcontainsthreelayersofprofoundmeaning.（过渡句）Initially,thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedthephenomenonthatpeopleingrowingnumbershaveparticipatedinthecampaign.Additionally,somepeopleinthedevelopedareasareleadingaluxuriouslifewhileinsomeunderdevelopedregions,agreatnumberofpeoplearestilllivinginsheerpoverty.Finally,themovement,directlyorindirectly,willexertafar-reachinginfluenceonthewesternareaseventhecountryasawhole.Generallyspeaking,supposeourgovernmentdoesnotpayenoughattentiontothewest,ourwholecountrywouldbecomeunbalancedandunabletosurviveandthrive(intheruthleandrelentlecompetition)（结论）
总共6句话
第一句仍然直接说出深层含义（由浅入深的写法确实是比较弱智）
第二句是关键：这是一句过渡句，提示阅卷人，我接下来要分三点来分析这个问题，自己制造这句话，可以避免模板同时还可以提示脉络同时还可以顺便凑个字数
例句如下：
1.Thispictureisthought-provokinginthatitconveysthefollowingthreelayersofsubtleconnotations.
2.Thesubtleimplicationcanbeanalyzedinthefollowingthreeinterrelatedaspects.
3.Inordertoderiveprofoundimplicationfromit,wecandissectthisenlighteningpictureinthefollowingthreeaspects.
以上三句话的意思无非就是：考官注意啊，我要写三点了！
然后开始写自己的1，2，3每点一句话（当然如果你可以多写几句也不是问题，控制时间
就OK）
第三句是第一点，initially/tobeginwith/firstandforemost
第四句是第二点，additionally/what’smore/moreover/furthermore
第五句是第三点，finally/lastbutnotleast
至于最后一句第六句，以前怎么总结，现在还怎么总结，注意关联词Generallyspeaking。2016年：合作
【审题构思】
第一段解析：这是一道单图题。图画中是两个都只有一条腿的人，丢开了拐杖，互相搀扶着往前走。文字说明：“你一条腿，我一条腿；你我一起，走南闯北。”根据我们课堂的讲解，单图题第一段写3句。图画描述应有两句，挖掘两个可写点，串成两句简单描述即可。最后一句可以对图画进行挖掘后总结，比如“他们有了互相的帮助，自信而乐观的迎接着挑战”(Undoubtedly,witheachother’shelp,theyareembracingtheupcomingchallengeswithconfidenceandoptimism)也可以对文字说明进行简单翻译，也就是我们课堂解释过的Thecaptionreads/indicates,或者Weareinformedbythecaptionthat“YouhavemerelyonelegandsodoI.Helpingeachother,wecantravelaroundtheworld.”最后一句还可以简单发表评论，说明合作的重要性，但第一段始终是描述段，对深刻含义的评论不宜过多，一句即可，否则跑题。
不少考生反映，这一段最难的写的是“拐杖”这个词语。Crutch对于考研的同学来说属于极其生僻的词语，改卷者也明白这个道理。只要你把这个意思表达出来就可以了，我们一直强调“第一秒写不出，第二秒换说法”，这里可以写为Supportingtools/assistantequipment/supportingsticks等等。
第二段解析：根据我们一直讲解的“天龙八部”写法，第二段应满足总分总的写法（或者是总分）。第一句要点明蕴涵在简单图画中的大道理，作为全段的主题句（论点），结尾最好以Generallyspeaking之类的关联词总结全段（结论）。中间的论据我们可以选择事实和现状描述，问题背景，原因或后果，层进，举例说明。可以分析现代社会合作的原因和必要性，可以描述合作在各个领域里的现状（如个人层面，企业层面，社会层面），可以讨论合作的好处，可以联系实际，举例说明合作的重要性。论点一句，论据4-5句，结论一句，第二段6-7句。
第三段解析：注意到提纲规定是“comments”。我们曾经对这个词进行过深入分析，水平高的同学可以自己发表议论，水平一般的人，可以把comments理解为suggestions,于是回到我们最熟悉的建议措施段，坏事当然提建议，好事也可以提出建议，使其变得更好。在这一段里，主题句一句，从意义过渡到建议上来；具体评论或措施2句，写出层次感；总结加展望未来一句，第三段4句。注意：考研写作的观点并无对错之分，只要不跑题即可。06年可以写追星的负面意义，也可以正面挖掘积极方面；07年可以写为自信，也可以写为挑战，人生意义。08年的写作，写为合作，互相帮助，困难中互相扶持均属合理。在考研写作三大要素语言结构思路里，思路始终是次要的。关键是语言基本正确，结构清晰，逻辑严谨。
【参考范文】
Theimpressiveandthought-provokingcartoongraphicallyportraysamovingsceneinvovingtwohandicappedmen.Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthatthetwocripples,leavingtheircrutchesbehindandsupportingeachotherwiththeirpowerfulhands,arewalkingforwardwithconfidenceandoptimism.Inaddtion,weareinformedbythecaptionthat“YouhavemerelyonelegandsodoI.Helpingeachother,wecantravelaroundtheworld.”
Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoinformusthatdueattentionhasto
bepaidtotheissueofcooperation,whichisprevalentandpervasiveincontemporarysociety.Onaccountofthequickeningpaceoflife,unprecedentedcompetitioninallwalksoflifemakesitdifficultforasingleindividualtofinishanarduoustaskallbyhimself.Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedtheincreaseofcollaborationbothacademicallyandprofessionally.Ontheonehand,scholarsandscientistsbenefitconsiderablyfromthecoordinateeffortsamongavarietyofuniversities.Ontheotherhand,teamworkamongdifferentcompaniesexertsanundeniablyfar-reachingimpactontheirdevelopment.Generallyspeaking,ifwewereisolatedfromthesociety,wewouldfeeldesperateintheruthleandrelentlecompetition.
Accordingly,itisimperativeforustoderivepositiveimplicationsfromtheprofoundpicture.Foronething,weshouldbeeducatedandenlightenedtoenhancetheawareneofcooperation.Foranother,wecantakeadvantageoftheadvancedscienceandtechnologytohelpusworkwithotherseffectivelyandefficiently.Itisinthiswaythatwecanmakeoursocietydevelopinaprosperous,harmoniousanddynamicdirection.
2016年：网络的近与远
天龙八部之坏事版
Apparently,thepurposeofthesketchistoconvinceusthatconsiderableemphasishastobeplacedupontheissueofInternetcommunication,whichisprevalentandpervasiveincontemporarysociety.Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactpeopleinincreasingnumbersareaddictedtothecyberworld,forthereasonthatsurfingonlinecanprovidethemwithfascinationandrecreation.Regrettably,wearesoobsessedwiththevirtualworldthatwealmostturnablindeyetotherealinterpersonalcommunicationaroundus,whichnotonlyposesapotentialandprobablethreatonournormalcontactwithotherpeople,butalsomakesourlifeisolated.Generallyspeaking,hardlycanwemaintainphysicalandpsychologicalhealthifweweredeprivedofsocialcommunication.
4句话。第一句点明主旨：网络交流问题
第二句现状+原因分析：很多人沉迷于网络世界，因为网络的诱惑和娱乐。
第三句转折+结果：我们太迷恋而忽视了人际交往，这样对正常交流不好，也让我们隔绝开来
第四句威胁性总结
三分天下之坏事版
Apparently,thepurposeofthesketchistoconvinceusthatconsiderableemphasishastobeplacedupontheissueofInternetcommunication,whichisprevalentandpervasiveincontemporarysociety.Thispictureisthought-provoking,inthatitcontainsthefollowingthreelayersofmeanings.Initially,nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactpeopleinincreasingnumbersareaddictedtothecyberworld,forthereasonthatsurfingonlinecanprovidethemwithfascinationandrecreation.Additionally,wearesoobsessedwiththevirtualworldthatwealmostturnablindeyetotherealinterpersonalcommunicationaroundus.Finally,hardlycanwemaintainclosecontactwithpeople,bothindividuallyandsocially,ifwefailtoattachgreatimportancetosocialcommunication.
5句话。第一句深刻含义
第二句过渡句
第三四五句分论点1，2，3
双刃剑版
Apparently,thepictureisametaphorofathought-provokingphenomenon:theInternetisa
double-edgedsword.(Ontheonehand)ThepastseveralyearsareaccompaniedbyunprecedenteddevelopmentoftheInternet,andpeopleinmountingnumbersarebenefitingfromitsamazingconvenienceincommunication.Itcanbeaptlyexemplifiedbytheeffectiveandefficient“chattingtools(softwares)”rangingfromQQtoMSN.Regrettably(Ontheotherhand),unabletoresistthefascinationandtemptationofthecyberworld,agreatnumberofpeoplefailtonoticetheimportanceofsocialactivitiesandinterpersonalcommunication.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thephenomenonwouldbecomeunimaginableanduncontrollable/peoplewouldsufferfromseverecommunicationcrisis.
5句话
第一句点明主旨双刃剑。
第二句说明网络发展对交流的好处--拉近我们的距离
第三句举例说明好处（2，3两句是正面描述）
第四句说明沉迷网络缺乏交流的现状
第五句威胁性说明网络的坏处--拉远了我们的距离（交流危机）（4，5两句是反面描述）
三、建议措施段/评论看法段
1.国家立法2人民教育/唤起意识3媒体宣传4.自己做起5.自由发挥
Accordingly,itisimperativeforustoderivepositiveimplicationsfromtheprofoundpicture.Foronething,weshouldbeeducatedandenlightenedtoenhancetheawareneofcooperation.Foranother,wecantakeadvantageoftheadvancedscienceandtechnologytohelpusworkwithotherseffectivelyandefficiently.Itisinthiswaythatwecanmakeoursocietyprosperous,harmoniousandvigorous.
四、举例论证段（2001，2004，2016）
Acaseinpointisthesuccessfullaunchingof“ShenzhouⅤspacecraft”whichsetsChinainahighpositionofaviationandspaceflight.AlthoughitmeansagreatachievementforusChinese,wearefacingnewchallengesinthefutureandneedtodofurtherresearchinspacetechnology.Anotherillustrationiscloselyrelatedtous,theexaminees.Ifwepathistestandarefortunatelyadmittedbyauniversity,weshallnotstopmakingefforts.Instead,weareconfrontedwiththechallengeofconqueringthedifficultgraduatecourses.Westillhavetostriveforsucceinourfutureacademicstudy,employmentandcareer.Onthewhole,theseexampleseffectivelyclarifythesayingthat“Destinationisanotherstartingpoint.”
十大话题：
一.
人口问题
二.
西部大开发
三.
网络和双刃剑（金钱，阳光）
四.
成功，梦想和现实
五.
职业选择和规划/高分低能
六.
洋节和传统节日
七.
神七上天和嫦娥奔月
八.
地震与爱心
九.
奥运举办
十.
抄袭与诚信
补充题目：伪劣商品；食品安全；抄袭与诚信；乱收费（因果：因：法律制度不完善，部分人只顾自己利益，忽视学生利益;果：为社会，个人带来不良后果和巨大压力）节俭与压力；心理问题；交通阻塞
从现状（实际生活例子），原因，结果（后果或者影响）,建议措施四大方向来分析小作文部分
开门见山说意图
咨询建议一二三
不同内容可分段
感谢客气不可少
期待回信成惯例
2006年真题解析
YouwanttocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.Writealettertothedepartmentconcerned,askingthemtohelpfindacandidate.Youshouldspecifywhatkindofchildyouwanttohelpandhowyouwillcarryoutyourplan.
Don'tsignyourownname...."LiMing"instead.Don'twritetheaddress.
Towhomitmayconcern,
IwishtocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.Havingconceivedsuchaplanforalongperiod,Iwritethislettertorequestyourhelptorecommendacandidate.
Iwonderifitisconvenientforyouiftwothingsconcerningthechildaretakenintoconsideration.First,thechildshouldcomefromGuiZhouProvincebecauseIintendtohelpachildfrommyhometown.Second,itwillbebetterifthechildisaprimaryschoolstudent.Actually,Iamgoodatteachingmathematicsatelementarylevel.
Myplanwillbecarriedoutasfollows.First,Iwillremitatleast300yuanincasheverymonthsoastoreducethefinancialburdenofthefamily.Moreimportantly,IdecidetoteachthechildmathandEnglishinpersonduringmysummervacation,whichwillsurelybemorebeneficialtothechild.
Ireallyappreciateyourhelp,andIlookforwardtoyourreplyassoonaspossible.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
感谢信
Directions:
Yourdelegation（代表团）hasjustreturnedfromavisittoauniversityinGreatBritain.AndyouwerewarmlytreatedtherebyProfessorHerthwell.Pleasewritealettertoexpreyourthankstohimforhishospitalityandhopeforfurthercooperation.
DearProf.Herthwell,（告诉了名字，又知道是教授，最好这么称呼）
Iamwritingthislettertoexpremysinceregratitudeforyourkindhospitalityyoushowedto
ourdelegationduringourvisitinyouruniversity.(写信意图：感谢对方的热情招待)
Iamindebtedtoyourgeneroushelptoourvisit.Itwasniceofyoutointroducemetosomanyofyourfamousprofessorsatyouruniversity.Inaddition,weappreciatetheaccommodationyouprovidedforus.WehadafantastictimeinBritainandwillneverforgetit.（感激内容：鉴于这是感谢信，内容发生在过去，在这里套用Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldtakeintoconsideration是不太合适的。用关联词1，2，3也显得呆板。于是调整了一下，大意是：我感激你的慷慨帮助。你介绍了很多教授给我认识。另外，（INADDITION，不用1，2，3了），提供的住宿很好，我们很爽，绝对不会忘记）（注意时态）
Meanwhile,Ihopeyouwillsomedaypayashortvisittoouruniversityandgiveussomelectureson“ModernWesternEconomics”.(这句是提纲要求hopeforfurthercooperation.不写的话严重扣分)(或者Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldpayashortvisittoouruniversity)Ifyouhaveinterestinouruniversity,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeformoreinformation.
YoursSincerely
LiMing
段落句子分布详情
1-4-2总共7句，113字，已经超纲
询问信
Directions:Youwanttostudyatacertainforeignuniversity.Writealettertoaskaboutthesituationthereasregardswhatqualificationsoneneedsforacceptance,fees,possiblescholarships,andaccommodation.
DearSirorMadam,
IamaChinesestudentwhowishestoapplyforadmissionintoyourprestigiousuniversity.Myplanistostartmycoursenextterm,andIwouldbegratefulifyouwouldbekindenoughtoprovidemewithcertainessentialinformation.
First,whatqualificationsdoIneedtofollowacourseofstudyatyouruniversity?Ihavealreadyhadabachelor’sdegreefromBeijingUniversity,butIwonderifthereareanyfurtheracademicrequirements.Second,howmucharethetuitionfees?AlthoughIintendtobeself-supporting,Iwouldbeinterestedtohearifthereareanyscholarshipsavailableforinternationalstudents.Third,whatisthesituationregardingaccommodation?
Ilookforwardtoyourreply,andtoattendingyouresteemedinstitution.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
推荐信
Towhomitmayconcern,
AsthedirectorofPhilosophyDepartment,Iamwritingtoyoutorecommendoneofmybestfriends,Mark.Eros,toyourdistinguisheddepartment.
Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldbeinterestedtoknowhisdetailsviathisletter.Firstly,…What’smore….Lastbutnotleast……
Therefore,Idonothesitatetorecommendhimasanidealcandidateforyourposition.Ifyou
haveanyquestionsconcerninghisbackground,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeformoreinformation.
备忘录/报告（MEMO）：备忘录在本质上也是书信，一般是写给同事的一种正式而简短的信，常常是有关工作事宜等。它的主体部分和书信几乎一样，只是省略其中的礼貌结尾。同时，MEMO不需要结束语和签名。（但结尾可以写Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedonothesitatetocontactmeformoreinformation.）
写作格式：
Date:日期如September12,2001
To：收件人
From:发件人
Subject：事由，如FacultyMeeting
范文：Directions:
Youareanactivememberofthestudentnewspaper.Thenewspaperiscurrentlylookingforajournalistforthesummersemester.Writeamemothatwillappearinthenewspapernextweekdescribingthepositionavailable.
Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.
提纲分析：没有具体的提纲要求，中间完全自己发挥。
P1：写作目的：招人
P2：具体细节：展开2-3点。三点最好，每点一句即可。可以从以下方面展开：
1）招聘条件2）上班时间3）工作任务4）薪水待遇5）培训机会Date:August10,2004
To:Allstudents
From:LiMing
Subject:JournalistPositionAvailablefortheSummerSemester
Onbehalfofthestudentsnewspaper,IamwritingthisMEMOtoinformyouthatwearegoingtorecruitanewstaff.Andthedetailsarelistedasfollows.(写作意图/写此MEMO的目的)（2句，30字）
Firstly,Applicantsshouldcurrentlybestudyingattheuniversity,andshouldpreferablyhaveatleasttwoyears’writingexperience.Secondly,thesuccessfulapplicantwillbeexpectedtowritetwoarticleseveryweekonhappeningsinthecityandoncampus.Finally,thepositionwillcommenceattheendofMayandwilllastthroughtotheendofAugust.（3句，59字）
Ifyouareinterested,pleasesendyourresumetothecampusnewspaperoffice.(OR:Ifyouhaveanyquestionsconcerningtheposition/application,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeformoreinformation.)（1句，13字）
公告/告示
1.标题(Announcement或者具体活动)放中间
2.写作日期位于标题下一行，右顶格
3.无须称呼结尾礼貌语，但可以写Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedonothesitatetocontactmeformoreinformation.而且要署名，一般是机构，题目会告之
Youruniversity,XinhuaUniversity,isgoingtocelebrateits60thanniversary.Writeanannouncementwhichcoversthefollowinginformation.
1)openingandclosingdatesofthecelebrations,
2)celebrationactivities,
3)aninvitationtoallthepaststudents,and
4)waystocontact.
http://www.oh100.com eXinhuaUniversityattheendoftheannouncement.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(10points)
提纲分析：
P1：公告/活动目的
P2：活动细节1。时间（提纲1）2。活动（提纲2）（最好自己再发挥一点）P3：邀请+联系（提纲3，4）
Announcement
January19,2016
Amonth-longanniversarycelebrationwillbeheldatXinhuaUniversity,tosaluteits60thanniversary.Andthedetailsoftheactivityarelistedasfollows.
Firstly,itwillstart/commencefromSeptember16th,2005andcontinuetoOctober.15th,2005.Secondly,seminars,culturalandathleticsportsactivities,andmanyotherprogramsareplannedtomarkthisgloriousoccasionoftheuniversity.Finally,ourmayorwillbepresenttomakeaspeechtoo.
Hereby（特此，很经典）wesincerelyinviteallouralumnitobepresenttosharethesehappiesthoursoftheschool.Ifyouhaveanyquestions, http://www.oh100.com .(OR:Ifyouhaveanyquestions,youaremostwelcometocontactusformoreinformation.)
XinhuaUniversity
总结：不管如何，MEMO和公告的共同点是：
P1：活动/事件目的+Andthedetailsoftheactivityarelistedasfollows.
P2：细节的安排改写提纲+合理扩展写三点
P3：问题联系方式Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedonothesitatetocontactmeformoreinformation.